South of the Southern City, Summer's Not Yet Here

There are two points in writing a novel, either writing your own story and adding a little bit of friends or imagination around you. Or just rely on your brain's imagination. You may not write very well the first time you write, so you can take your time. Just keep writing more and more, and think clearly about what you want to write when you write.

I just feel that the male protagonist is a bit different... We only met once and he was like that after just a few words? This love is too simple. There should be more stories to better highlight the sadness of the male protagonist in the later stages. Also, I can't figure out what this novel is written around? It's a bit disorganized and can't be connected in series.

What can I say, the writing is pretty good. It's just that the content is not clear. What is it about? I feel like the male protagonist has a little bit of a change of heart... I fell in love with him just because of a few words when we first met. There should be some stories to further highlight the sadness of the male protagonist in the later period...