Completed historical romance with a sweet-pampering ending: The Beloved Consort, an amnesiac assassin x a "fake" prince.
Upcoming historical romance: The Beloved Crown Princess's Road to Glory. A timid little dumpling is pampered all the way to the top by a scheming crown prince.
What the heck? Xu Jinxi only got shocked by a power strip, but when she woke up, she'd become the most tragic Empress Zhaoyang in history? And she only has a few months left before she's executed! No way! Xu Jinxi hasn't found a way back yet, so Empress Zhaoyang can't die!
[Mini Scene]
Jun Yu's grip loosened a little, and his tone was full of reproach. "If I didn't hold on to you like this, what if you secretly ran off again?"
Xu Jinxi was speechless. Just then, she felt her wrist slip free, and she was shoved away.
It all happened so suddenly. Xu Jinxi's mind went blank. She felt herself go weightless, then landed hard on the ground, sprawling face-first like a dog eating shit...
Xu Jinxi was furious. She endured the pain, feeling as if every bone in her body had been scattered, and struggled to her feet, ready to confront Jun Yu.
But when she turned around, she was stunned...
Jun Yu was leaning weakly against the tree behind him. A silver dart was embedded deep in his flesh, and blood was streaming from his arm.
At that life-or-death moment, Jun Yu had instinctively shoved Xu Jinxi away and taken the dart for her!
The heroine isn't a fake innocent, and she's not blinded by love.
Do you like a heroine like this? (.⌒0⌒).
I'm a new author with a new story, so there may be a few bugs. I hope you'll be patient with me~
The beginning has a little angst, but the later parts are very sweet. It has a happy ending, so please feel free to dive in~
[A transmigration story with two souls. Includes palace intrigue, political scheming, and romance.]
[An alternate history set a thousand years ago. No need to scrutinize the historical details.]
This newbie is begging for follows, support, and comments!!!
Recommended stories by friends:
The Emperor and Consort's Plan by Gu Lishang, a heroine spoiled until she causes trouble / Poppies Blooming in the Harem by Qingcheng Shuse, a transmigrated woman's reborn revenge and palace-intrigue journey / The Widow Investigates Corpses by Xia Wange / Frayed Silk [GL] by Shiliuyeque, if I see you, no beauty in the world can compare / The Young Master Returns by Xifan Bobo, all this trouble was the ancestors' fault / The Twin Hairpins of Xiang and Chu by Xiaoxiao Xiangshui, an ordinary girl's coming-of-age story / (System) The Internet Celebrity Who Transmigrated into a Cold, Aloof Immortal by Jin Lu / Returning in the Cold by Shi Jiuxian
Premise:
I found this fully booked article in the VIP service, and I had no impression of having read it before. It was like reading it for the first time. Could it be that some aliens have erased my memory?
I rarely write reviews... But after reading this article, I really can't help but complain... God knows what I've been through! The beginning of the first few chapters is pretty good, with the usual palace-travel stories and the daily abolition of the queen. I thought it was an article about a king who won the emperor's heart and became the master of the harem, but later I found out that it was a bronze article. I felt like my thinking was very confusing when I was writing, and there was no connection between what happened before and after, or the psychology of the characters. There is a feeling of coming out one after another. The main people talked about it one by one. First of all, the emperor, who checked and balanced the two families, hated the heroine. In the first life, he also executed the queen because of the concubine's words. Later, after he fell in love with the heroine, he said that he would have never supported others to bully your family. He was a typical pillow person with no judgment ability at all. As for the prince, the article said at the end that the prince loved the heroine since he was a child, but he turned against her because the emperor was robbing her. But before that, the heroine was sent flying in the small thatched house to test the emperor's heart. It didn't just fly his arm, it flew straight to death. In the middle process, the love for the heroine is fake, and using the heroine to achieve the purpose of rebellion is the real expression. It feels like the target is plotting rebellion and the heroine is being exploited in the process. The goal is to be with the heroine, so he rebels. The two are intertwined. So what does the prince want to do? The heroine is also very strange. She has no power to control the chicken and has been holding back, and she has no particularly attractive highlights. At the beginning of the article, the heroine feels that the emperor is cute, but the emperor treats her badly and feels that the emperor is unpredictable and wants to run away. When I was thinking about escaping, I met the prince and fell in love with the handsome prince. After discovering that the prince was using her and that the emperor loved her, she became inseparable from him life and death. Is there such a thing as a scumbag girl? ! The whole article doesn't say why the original soul appears from time to time. Sometimes he would come out when he was hungry (what's the reason?) And sometimes he would almost burst out. The imperial concubine loves the emperor and is a scheming bitch who wants to win the emperor's heart. Later, he and the prince rebelled inexplicably! ! Rebellion! What's the benefit of killing the emperor? ! She doesn't like the prince! Destroy what you can't get? The emperor didn't put her in the cold palace until she was assassinated, right? Sometimes he ignores the heroine because of her, how proud is he? The heroine didn't even start to fuck her, she just did the opposite for no apparent reason.
It feels a bit confusing. The prince's reaction is inexplicable, the concubine's surrender is also inexplicable, and why was the queen trampled so miserably by the concubine before? Judging from the prince's memories, the two girls have known each other since childhood? Then the Zhao family should not be ordinary people, right?
Gua Chi Gu Chi, the author has made great progress?
Personally, I think it would be better to use less exclamation points? I have a feeling that the female protagonist takes the initiative to block the knife for the male protagonist, and the male protagonist and the female protagonist encounter assassins every time they go out.
After reading this, I hope I can write better and better in the future~
Please, please come out and write articles later when your thoughts are a little more mature. The image you created of a scumbag and a bitch is too unqualified.
Although it is said that one should not make harsh remarks when writing for the first time, I still want to say that this author is not suitable for writing. Don't force yourself to write something that makes no sense, has a blunt plot, and has rubbish characters. Your writing is frustrating and gives us a headache.
It's a bit messy, I don't know how to describe it.
The emotional development line is inexplicable, and I feel a little tired of being stabbed all the time.
I found this fully booked article in the VIP service, and I had no impression of having read it before. It was like reading it for the first time. Could it be that some aliens have erased my memory?
I rarely write reviews... But after reading this article, I really can't help but complain... God knows what I've been through! The beginning of the first few chapters is pretty good, with the usual palace-travel stories and the daily abolition of the queen. I thought it was an article about a king who won the emperor's heart and became the master of the harem, but later I found out that it was a bronze article. I felt like my thinking was very confusing when I was writing, and there was no connection between what happened before and after, or the psychology of the characters. There is a feeling of coming out one after another. The main people talked about it one by one. First of all, the emperor, who checked and balanced the two families, hated the heroine. In the first life, he also executed the queen because of the concubine's words. Later, after he fell in love with the heroine, he said that he would have never supported others to bully your family. He was a typical pillow person with no judgment ability at all. As for the prince, the article said at the end that the prince loved the heroine since he was a child, but he turned against her because the emperor was robbing her. But before that, the heroine was sent flying in the small thatched house to test the emperor's heart. It didn't just fly his arm, it flew straight to death. In the middle process, the love for the heroine is fake, and using the heroine to achieve the purpose of rebellion is the real expression. It feels like the target is plotting rebellion and the heroine is being exploited in the process. The goal is to be with the heroine, so he rebels. The two are intertwined. So what does the prince want to do? The heroine is also very strange. She has no power to control the chicken and has been holding back, and she has no particularly attractive highlights. At the beginning of the article, the heroine feels that the emperor is cute, but the emperor treats her badly and feels that the emperor is unpredictable and wants to run away. When I was thinking about escaping, I met the prince and fell in love with the handsome prince. After discovering that the prince was using her and that the emperor loved her, she became inseparable from him life and death. Is there such a thing as a scumbag girl? ! The whole article doesn't say why the original soul appears from time to time. Sometimes he would come out when he was hungry (what's the reason?) And sometimes he would almost burst out. The imperial concubine loves the emperor and is a scheming bitch who wants to win the emperor's heart. Later, he and the prince rebelled inexplicably! ! Rebellion! What's the benefit of killing the emperor? ! She doesn't like the prince! Destroy what you can't get? The emperor didn't put her in the cold palace until she was assassinated, right? Sometimes he ignores the heroine because of her, how proud is he? The heroine didn't even start to fuck her, she just did the opposite for no apparent reason.
It feels a bit confusing. The prince's reaction is inexplicable, the concubine's surrender is also inexplicable, and why was the queen trampled so miserably by the concubine before? Judging from the prince's memories, the two girls have known each other since childhood? Then the Zhao family should not be ordinary people, right?
Gua Chi Gu Chi, the author has made great progress?
Personally, I think it would be better to use less exclamation points? I have a feeling that the female protagonist takes the initiative to block the knife for the male protagonist, and the male protagonist and the female protagonist encounter assassins every time they go out.
After reading this, I hope I can write better and better in the future~
Please, please come out and write articles later when your thoughts are a little more mature. The image you created of a scumbag and a bitch is too unqualified.
Although it is said that one should not make harsh remarks when writing for the first time, I still want to say that this author is not suitable for writing. Don't force yourself to write something that makes no sense, has a blunt plot, and has rubbish characters. Your writing is frustrating and gives us a headache.
It's a bit messy, I don't know how to describe it.
The emotional development line is inexplicable, and I feel a little tired of being stabbed all the time.