Interstellar Divine Doctor

I see that the main text is finished, but the plot in the text is not there yet, it should be in the extra story later. How can I put it this way? The characters are pretty good and the plot is pretty good. There are no reviews that discourage me from quitting it. At least I watched it in one sitting. But the shortcomings are also obvious. First of all, the time method is too abrupt. It is always used at plot points that can obviously be written well. When I watched it at the time, I felt very divisive. Secondly, because the career line is too prominent, the protagonist's relationship is also relatively abrupt. It is clear that the relationship between children has not reached the level of love, but suddenly they meet each other and run in both directions when they grow up. Also, there are many stories buried in the entire world line, and there are many supporting characters, but they are not well written. The explanations are all explained once, but it feels like it has been concluded in a smooth manner. For example, the three friends who worked as star thieves with Gong Shou in the early stage never appeared again in the later stage. Shou's roommates and Gong's friends were all like this. After appearing once or twice, there was no more words. As a result, the author forgot to name the supporting characters, right? The biggest boss in the whole article is clearly the Speaker, a foreigner, who was foreshadowed in the early stage. However, it was too easy for these two bosses to receive lunch boxes. In the later period, the boss became Nata, the telekinesis master. It feels like the first half and the second half of this article are two articles. You can change the map, no problem, but the story at the beginning was not explained very clearly. Then I changed the map later, and it was not explained clearly, and it ended. The protagonist's gold finger is so wide open that he can get whatever he wants. The protagonist's smart mecha line is not clearly written. The protagonist's space is so big and there is a bug. He later collected so many people into the space and no one responded. It is too strange. You can say that this is a career-oriented article. The protagonist did not become famous in the end (it does not mean that he became famous after saving an empire). The protagonist's medical skills, medicinal materials, internal strength, teleportation, force, etc., The author gave him too many things, too complicated and confusing, click this setting, the protagonist should not just be a hero, he should be a god. If you just want to be a hero and pick any of these abilities, you can write a very complete story). If you want to write a love story, the love line is relatively inconspicuous. In general, the author wanted to write too many things and it was too complicated, so he may not have figured out what stories he had buried, so the reader will have the feeling of "I read it, but I feel like I didn't read anything" at the end. The plot outline in the individual maps is still okay, and so is the character description. Although the shortcomings are obvious, the author is still able to keep readers reading in one breath, so the advantages are also obvious. This article was written a few years ago. The author will slowly improve and it will always be better.

Xiaobai is super cute and has such a sense of picture!

I stayed up late to read it and felt uncomfortable all day long. Harmful. Good looks hurt me. Let's follow the serialization

It would be good to write the second dungeon as a side story. I spent a lot of time writing about the different world, but left out a lot of details, which made me a little confused. The two parties had not seen each other for ten years. They were just childhood friends. After several treatments, they determined their feelings (Xiao Jin, you are just greedy for his body!!). Later, they also hurriedly confirmed their relationship. There was no sweet process, and they met their parents and got married. . In addition, there are many things that have not been explained. Did the fourth senior brother bury the story and forget it (I have been thinking about the reincarnation of the senior brother for a long time!!), What happened to the two roommates, Qin Rui, his mother, and the speaker did not follow up, and the necklace made of the small stone cut in the cave did not seem to be given (did I miss it 555). I always feel that there are still a lot of suspense that have not been revealed. It ended like this. It was too caught off guard. I hope the writing will be better! See you in the next article!

I think, if the love is so strong, Chinese medicine can appear in space?

Very well written!

Although it's so long, I'm so satisfied_(:3∠?)_It feels so good~

Good luck to the author. Although the writing and logic are a bit lacking, the plot settings are great. I look forward to the next book.

After watching it, I applaud, it's very interesting

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