The Psychic Master Show

Dear Mrs. Inni, you have started to commit your old habit of starting at the beginning but ending at the end again. There are several books in this book. Starting from Qingyueguan to the recent River God Boy, all of them are beginning at the end but ending at the end. The book of Underworld is the most unfinished. The boy has done well. Thank you. Do you have no outline? Or is it that the outline you wrote is off track? Can't you just avoid making this mistake? Every time someone tries to amway you, the first reaction is that it's a mess, and then it's pure love for no CP. Isn't this bad? When can we have a positive image?

It feels like it lacks a little bit of villain ending, including another Bai.

To be honest, I think the emotional line is pretty good. The plot goes well. At first I thought the characters were a bit flat, but that's not the case. This allows us to jump out of the protagonist's perspective and, as readers of the story, have a better understanding of this group portrait (I think it's true, as it takes a lot of words to describe other people). Some of the inexplicable places give us more room for imagination, which in turn intensifies the feeling that the story is not over, their program, and life are still going on. The content is also very novel (some places seem to give people an indescribable feeling, very transparent)

I'm very happy that Qing Yue Guan can open the follow-up, but can I not change the attack [split] and ask the master to be the attacker [split]? The first thing I read is that Qing Yue Guan has already set the cp. I can't watch the zombie trail anymore. Please, please don't fuck me [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] It's really scary to see the master in the supporting role column behind the brother

Why don't we have some extras? It feels like it has sped up in the later stages, which is a pity.

The second half of the explanation about the past, present and future of Chalk is too abstract for me and a bit incomprehensible. I need to study it carefully for a second time.

Is it appropriate not to have another 10 extra episodes... I'm broken [crying] [split]

The previous writing is particularly good, interlocking and very interesting. But starting from the chapter about Bai Luo's accident, it was too chaotic. 40% Or even less was the show, and the rest was almost the two people's explanations of time. It was very uncomfortable, and it seemed that they were always trying to teach me something. It is understandable that this is to save Bai Ke, but many of his subsequent actions are not explained, such as the person surnamed Su in the previous article, etc. Or did these people end up on the bus in the previous article? All in all, it felt like it was very far away from the show. It seemed like there were only two protagonists left in the world. It really achieved the effect that neither of them belonged to human beings - because they were also far away from me! It made me feel that they were transcendent and separated from the world of mortals. I started reading the Bible! It would be much better if we could write a few more episodes of the program, add some real negotiations from the international side, and deepen the reality foundation in the article. I don't mean to teach the author how to write, but I'm just speaking from my personal point of view: the ending of such a good article is just like this, and there is not even a supplementary setting! It makes me feel that this world that was so solidly created in the early stage is completely illusory even in this article (could it be said that this is the purpose? But the reading is very poor), anyway, I leave this comment that my heart will not be broken.

[Shy][Shy]Meimei521[Purple Sugar]kswl

. . . I finally finished watching it. The later development was inexplicable and the villain was not even dead yet.