The Heartthrob Is a Woman

It's so annoying that the heroines always have their own awesome identities and powerful cheats, and then they all go to the entertainment industry to slap ordinary people in their pretense. Can't there be a plot that makes cheats shine? What's the point of always hiding and then dealing with ordinary people, setting a strong background and cheating?

Great, a very heart-warming article. I don't know if it's because I'm too easily moved or because the author's writing is too soft. I often had tears in my eyes while reading the book, but I didn't even cry. Everyone is very nice, and Bo Zhi is just a naughty little angel, so lovable! The ending is also great. Seeing Bo Zhi and her saxaul leaning together to look at the stars, thinking about memories, and talking about the future, it was like seeing that their whole life would always be so plain and beautiful. In the end, I actually seemed to have ordered everything? After reading it, I realized that I was not reminded to subscribe during the whole process_(:з)∠)_

There are quite a few articles that have the same existence as Bai Yueguang in my heart. This one, Slaying the Dragon Dog, Click to Get It, Loyal Dog Girlfriend, Becoming an A-Queen, etc. Except for pure love, I have read almost all of them. They are really heart-warming.

After reading it, let me comment on my personal aesthetic. The writing is average and the ideas are pretty good, but it's a bit out of control. The combination of going to extraterrestrials and other things later is very abrupt. In some places, I thought it was foreshadowing and ended up with no follow-up. Moreover, many places are mixed with hot current events of the year, which is not very friendly to readers who read it later. I think the author can improve the outline before starting to write, so as to facilitate the rhythm. It is also better to start setting up some foreshadowing that can echo the aliens later, so as to prevent readers who come from the entertainment industry from running away after the content is completely deviated. Also, when talking about science fiction, it's better to talk about science. Even if you change the name of the little elf and the big elf, it would be much better, especially the rock-skin dragon is too dramatic. Earth Support

Kafufu cried and fainted. Just call him Kafufu. Why did he change his name?

Looks good, it's like recharging myself, giving me the courage and strength to persevere.

It's finally finished. The early and middle stages are very interesting, and the early stages of Breaking into the Stars are also very interesting. However, in the later stages, the game is constantly flashing memories and killing, which is very annoying to watch. It seems that the author is really struggling with the emotional line. This article is anticlimactic, and the writing style is also very clear. I don't feel that there is a plot in the front, but in the later stage, it is full of emotion and memories. Authors always try to cram all kinds of attributives into long sentences, just like I used to cram in attributives randomly in order to meet the word limit for my composition. It's so embarrassing.

It's a very warm article, wow, I like it so much

I've read it several times. I really want to be someone like Bai Zhi.

This, I ordered everything? Why do I feel like I haven't seen it?