My Ex-Boyfriend Is a Superhero [Western Crossover]

The early stage was really well written, and the despair was well written. Maybe because of those things, the style was changed quite a bit, and the ending was also quite hasty.

Hey... What you wrote above is super good! ! Maybe it's because too many things happened in the middle, but it's very fun in the back. The dark style in the front is really good. I can try to develop it in the future [seriously jpg]

When I think about the huge difference in life between mutants and gods, what should I do when I get old?

It feels a bit chaotic, and Loki is quite OOC. The transition from collapse in the early stage feels a bit stiff. On Earth and in Asgard, they are completely different people. The transition from collapse to normal is too fast. Maybe there is Loki in Asgard who is recognized by the heroine? However, I feel that the writing is still very good in some places, but I feel that the contrast between the front and back painting styles is very strong, with the early stage being dark and the later stage being cookie-cutter. Also, if the one who is in love with the heroine in the front is Garfield, then is the red and blue boy with Deadpool in the back a Dutch bug?

This article has been in my collection for a long time and I read it in one sitting today. The writing style has changed a lot since then.

Nice(??.??)

It ended so quickly, I didn't even spend any money (=′口`=)

Can you put donuts on your head?

Can you put donuts on your head?

Beautiful, I like it very much O(∩_∩)O