
No Matter When, Always by Your Side, Crossing the Moon
不管何时,永伴渡月
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- –
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- 7k Words
- Genre
- Romance
- Era
- Ancient Era
- Updated
- 9y ago
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- JJWXC
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I am not good at character analysis. After all, I have read few books on psychology, so I will analyze the text (verb), chapter (water) and line (word) in detail. First of all, let's look at the introduction of the article. What happened between Qiujiu and Hongye, the article was written from Qiujiu's perspective, and the copy pointed out that this is the heroine's perspective, so Qiujiu is a girl. Hongye is a princess and a girl. (To be honest, when I saw that Qiujiu wanted to become a general, I thought she was a boy with a feminine name) There is a paragraph in the article: "After becoming a general, I had an indescribable feeling in my heart when I met Qiujiu, the princess of Hongye Princess." It seems that the sense of respect that Hongye had before because he is the princess has gradually transformed into another feeling. ''There is also Hongye asking Qiujiu to take her to escape. We can conclude that Hongye trusts Qiujiu very much and her feelings for Qiujiu are not pure. We can confirm the main line of red leaves and Qiujiu lily Looking at the content tags, the focus is on deep sadomasochism, past and present lives. To be honest, this article is not considered a sadomasochistic love story in my eyes. I should have missed it. The least sadistic sadomasochistic love story I have ever read is about loving each other, but having to sit down with a smile and stab the other person, and the other person doesn't know that he (she) is doing it for his (her) good. And Heimumu, it's time for you to expand your writing. There are too few words, how can it be seen that the sadomasochistic love is deep and described in detail? Past life and present life, the boy and girl and Qiu Jiuhongye at the end. Finally, do you know that "Qiujiu" is homophonic to "Please help", and what thoughts did you have in writing this article? And why not kill the dragon? Fill in another reason. A reason is too forced, just to add some drama to the red leaves. Or add a big identity to Qiujiu or Hongye. If this is Qiu Jiu's character, please add more psychological description. You can also write a side story about the relationship between red leaves and Tsukiwa Bridge. Red leaves and red maples, I don't believe you if you say they have nothing to do with each other. And I remember that you wrote that Hongye took the initiative to mention Yuedu Bridge to Qiujiu. This part should be foreshadowing, but what about the rest of it?? Does Hong Ye remember her past life or does she have a big secret? I have to say, this idea is still very good, at least I can't write it. I want to code words, but character design is a big problem. Moreover, I have been handing out dog food recently, and I guess the code words also carry a sour smell of love. I haven't finished watching "Brainwashing" yet, and I haven't watched "Anti-Brainwashing" yet. Forensic books also... Psychology and forensic science are really incomprehensible (◎_◎;)
This story is good, I like it, but there are just a lot of typos. By the way, is the princess married as a substitute~