[Reborn] I Won't Be a Rich Second-Generation Heir

The heroine's brain circuit is a bit weird. She was killed in her previous life, but she still wants to influence her in this life? Isn't this a mental retard?

I feel like there is no normal person, I am completely insane. If you write slowly, I will not continue reading. The writing is not ordinary bad. !

I feel like there is no normal person, I am completely insane. Author, if you write slowly, I will not continue reading. The writing is not ordinary bad!

I feel like there is no normal person, I am completely insane. Author, if you write slowly, I will not continue reading. The writing is not ordinary bad.

It's very sweet, the heroine, she wants to teach her sister who killed her. !

It's very sweet, the heroine, she wants to teach her sister who killed her.

The heroine SB, the author SB, the SB novel does not explain

Generally speaking, you should hate the person who killed you. The heroine feels very stupid.

He is 1.8 Meters tall in the first grade of junior high school, haha

Is it too cheerful to follow the plot? The characterization seems to have failed to keep up, and it feels so abrupt. I don't know what the two locked chapters are about, but the whole plot direction is a bit weird. The emotions between the characters are inexplicable and lack tension. How should I put it, there is no interaction between the two people. It is a bit pale and seems to be following the plot. There is also no cuteness or sparkle in the male protagonist, female protagonist and second male lead. Analyze one by one, the heroine is a typical silly and sweet person, she holds good cards but plays them badly, and is manipulated at will by any more powerful person. Kindness is not a shortcoming, but it is not shown well, giving people the impression of being cowardly, unopposed, and at the mercy of others. Not coveting power and sticking to one's heart are also advantages, but what they show is that they are not responsible. In fact, there are many people who lack control and reduce the number of supporting characters or reduce the number of appearances to highlight the protagonist. There is nothing wrong with that. The key is that the protagonist must be able to highlight the protagonist. The male protagonist keeps acting cool, mysterious... Meet, quarrel, and then get in a relationship with each other? We can think about it, in a relationship, a man and a woman are attracted to each other, then what is it that attracts each other? It's personality, circumstances and appearance. There must always be shining points and mutual attraction interactions, but the relationship between the male and female protagonists seems to be a few meters apart. There is no physical contact, no dodge and chase of eyes, no mutual appreciation of behavior and handling, and no silent tenderness of caring for details. What is left of this love? As for the second male lead, he seems to have a crush on him out of nowhere, but he can't get it? What about the details? What about the details? What about the details? Sorry, I said too much. The setting and story are good, but the specific character creation may not be interesting. Keep up the good work! I feel a sense of inexplicable guilt when I was about to post this comment, but I was a little bit reluctant to express it. I don't mean to curse, it's just a comment and analysis out of habit. I hope the author's stories will become more exciting as he writes them! ((>人<;) Sorry, I hope you don't hit me)