First Version
The First Time They Met
Girl: There's a feeling in my heart I can't explain. (I really want to laugh ^?^)
Boy: Who's that girl? Why is she... smiling! (Not happy)
The Nth Time
Girl: We're best buds, like brother and sister.
Boy: Brother? Sister? What the heck is that supposed to mean?
Woman: So... she's the one you like. What's so great about her? Tell me.
Man: I just like her. (Has no idea what to say)
Woman: What about me? Why her and not me?
Man: Don't be difficult. Be good.
Woman: And you have the nerve to tell me not to be difficult?
Man: Don't I have a face? (Moves closer to the woman)
Woman: Y-you... Don't come any closer!
The man scoops her up and carries her toward... "Got an itch for trouble lately? What are you even saying? Wasn't I always in love with you? You're making it sound like I dumped you."
He sets her down and says, "I love you."
Comedy Version
Girl: Hahaha! I'm going to conquer this sea of stars in the hall!
Boy: What the heck is she talking about?
Girl: Foolish man, he's mine! Hahahahahaha! (Triumphantly)
Boy: What is she saying? I'm not listening, not listening, not listening. I don't understand. (Blushing)
Woman: Your turn, man. (Throws a card)
Man: (His mouth twitches) I'm sorry! Please spare me!
Author: I'm a beginner, so please point out any mistakes. If I see your comment, I'll reply. If I don't, then...
By the way, did I ruin Draco? My heart aches. Fine, I'll try not to ruin him in the story. But there are a thousand Hamlets in a thousand readers' eyes. Hahaha.
I've decided to post the blurb early to make myself write. I'll try to publish the story before May or June, hahaha. It's probably in third person and rather chaotic.
Just saying, if you have any problems, tell me, but please don't curse me out. I'm a little flower bud, so fragile! If you want to read it, read it. If you don't, do as you please, just don't curse me out. You can criticize the story, hahaha.
I clicked the wrong thing. I deserve to kneel.
I'm bored, so I'm revising the blurb.
