The Umbrella-Maker's Wife and Her Life in the Water Town

Hello, author, I think the article you wrote is the best article I have ever read. The writing is smooth and the emotions are delicately portrayed. The most important thing is that the article conveys a value - there is nothing wrong with pursuing material wealth, but a gentleman loves money in a proper way. It makes me feel that the intention is high. This article inspires us lower class people to work hard and keep learning. I like Dada's style very much. Although it is not popular, I hope that the author can persist in what the male and female protagonists in the article should do and can continue to improve. The poor performance of Dada's online writing does not necessarily mean that the Dada's online writing is not good. It is most likely due to poor publicity. I have been reading articles for 10 years, and now I have read Dada's article. I have to say that I feel like I have just met you at a late date. I only found out about Dada's article through the recommendation in a post. I hope your online writing scores will get better and better. I really feel that Dada's writing has a unique style, which is not popular but has endless aftertaste. I hope you can continue writing!

It's so heartwarmingly written! Personally I think the only bad thing is Runsheng at the end! The heroine is also selfish! Although Aqin doesn't love Runsheng, she is already with Runsheng emotionally and rationally, and her parents also like her, so Ximei gets involved again! How will these two women decide in the end? Ximei's character is not suitable for Runsheng's family! In the end, wasn't it because he was plotted by Runsheng's parents? Can Runsheng disobey his parents for the sake of his wife? Ximei's family is also short of money. When the time comes, Xiu'er will definitely ask Ximei to help. Wouldn't Ximei be in a dilemma? Runze, this simple man, has to make a choice between two women! Is it necessary? Ah Qin will be a good match for Runsheng! It would be great if the heroine didn't get involved! Also, the forced matching of Dzogchen at the end was really unsatisfactory!

The article is a bit anticlimactic, especially the role of Jiao Ximei, which has a strong green tea flavor. Are Yunsheng and Aqin compatible? It's a problem between two people. However, even though Jiao Ximei knew that Runsheng was engaged, she pretended to worship and do good for Runsheng, and got in between Runsheng and Aqin, which was really unpleasant. Throughout life, you must have a certain bottom line, instead of putting your desires above etiquette and doing whatever you want.

So well written! I read it again and will come back soon to continue writing! Such good writing

There is no extra story, which makes people feel unbearable.

I'll give you 99 points and deduct one point because it's too short!!!

I stayed up late to finish reading it. It has been a long time since I have been reading books for more than ten years and I have not found such a book that I like. I hope the author will not give up on jj

I saw the author said in the introduction that his style is weird⊙▽⊙Please don't think so, don't ruin your own style to cater to Jinjiang's style. The author is great. Having your own characteristics is the basis for standing on the ground. Nowadays, there are too many people writing articles in Jinjiang Zhuifeng, and those jokes are repeated over and over without fear of being used up ╮(╯▽╰)╭ It is rare to have a good article with writing style, plot, and thinking like the author's Umbrella Craftsman, which can withstand readers' review. Author, do you know that when I search for novels in Jinjiang, I search them in chronological order, starting from the last page (ಥ_ಥ). I think the articles from a few years ago are much better than the ones now. The first ancient romance book I read, I'm not afraid of telling jokes, haha, it's called "The Prince is Too Bad, the Princess is Too Weird". I read it seven or eight years ago. I recently re-read the first chapter, and I actually think it's better than the current romance novels (>^ω^

I really want to complain about the part about leap students. A fool has many suitors! I still don't know who to choose! Except for the heroine, I am also obsessed with the criteria for finding a husband for other people. They are either prostitutes, gamblers, drug addicts or fools. Is the only male protagonist in a rural area a good man?

Seeing the sincerity in the author's words, I couldn't help but come out and say a few words after having been diving for thousands of years. These are all my personal opinions. I hope the author will not blame me. Personally, I think the biggest flaw of this article lies in three words: untrue. This unreality is largely due to the unclear positioning of the characters, which results in the character's words and deeds being very inconsistent with his identity. The heroine was relatively successful in shaping: due to her background, her mother valued her education and tried to find a way to send her as a maid apprentice to learn how to read. This fully explains why the heroine's knowledge and vision are different from those of ordinary mountain village women. The heroine's skills were also taught by her mother, and they are not beyond the scope of her access. In contrast, the image setting of the male protagonist is not so successful. As a male protagonist who has been an umbrella maker for generations and has never left a village or a small town in his life, why can he be literate and even say a few words to Zou Zou from time to time? This is quite inconsistent with his origin setting. Although the article assumes that there are many literate people in the town, the general background of the ancient Ming Dynasty cannot be ignored. The majority of the people at the bottom must be illiterate. The same problem occurs with other supporting characters. The speaking style of each character is not designed according to their own identity, and the usual words and phrases are similar to everyone. There is no obvious difference in the personalities of Miss Liu and Miss Li Er except that one is good from beginning to end and the other is bad for a while. On the other hand, in The Red Mansion, Daiyu is a lady, but in the whole story we only see her say the word "fart" (that's what I remember, I don't know if I remember correctly), but the words spoken by those rough ladies must be different from those of the girls. Xiangyun and Feng Lazi are also different in that they also have cheerful personalities. It's all the details that determine success or failure, and it won't make people feel like everyone is the same. The second problem is that the plot is too dramatic and illogical. I don't know if the author was hit because the article was not received well, and I feel that the rest of the article was obviously hastily ended. Except for a few foreshadowings that the author himself said were not written, there was not enough foreshadowing for other plots. In addition, it is still about the details. The author may not have been exposed to the pastry making in detail. With the production tools and productivity environment at that time, one person could make pastries that supplied the entire store. If the business was light, it could be dealt with. However, the article said that the business was so good, it was very difficult, and it needed to be done from morning to night. This can also be improved. Overall, it's good that the author of the new article can persist in finishing it. Come on, author~