Great story, reminds me of "Science Fiction World" I watched in junior high school
Big cheers for the author! I believe you will do better and better!
It is impossible to get such information about the original owner from the paparazzi's chatter. . . There will be no bugs if the setting has the memory of the original owner.
??? That's it????
I came here for the copywriting, and the idea is quite profound. The first chapter was actually pretty good, but the second chapter was a bit weak after traveling to the future.
Catch up. Jinjiang is a breath of fresh air with interesting settings~
The writing is great, but the story is a little bad. The first thing I noticed at first sight was the very familiar yet boring beginning. You see how good your writing is, but I couldn't even finish one chapter.
Watch more and think more about those movies with wonderful stories. Every detail does not have to be written so neatly.
You can definitely write a more exciting opening, and I have no doubt that you can handle it. I'm optimistic about you!
Well, the last chapter,
Wrong call? At the beginning, Professor Yan's name was Xixi?
Great story, reminds me of "Science Fiction World" I watched in junior high school
Big cheers for the author! I believe you will do better and better!
It is impossible to get such information about the original owner from the paparazzi's chatter. . . There will be no bugs if the setting has the memory of the original owner.
??? That's it????
I came here for the copywriting, and the idea is quite profound. The first chapter was actually pretty good, but the second chapter was a bit weak after traveling to the future.
Catch up. Jinjiang is a breath of fresh air with interesting settings~
The writing is great, but the story is a little bad. The first thing I noticed at first sight was the very familiar yet boring beginning. You see how good your writing is, but I couldn't even finish one chapter. Watch more and think more about those movies with wonderful stories. Every detail does not have to be written so neatly. You can definitely write a more exciting opening, and I have no doubt that you can handle it. I'm optimistic about you!
Well, the last chapter,
Wrong call? At the beginning, Professor Yan's name was Xixi?
You realize how powerful I am