After my boyfriend dumped me, I ran through the night and somehow stumbled into the otherworldly kingdom of Wuyin. A mysterious jade ring on my right hand, which foretells death, left me completely shaken on my very first day in this strange world. What secret does the jade ring, gleaming with an eerie light, conceal? Can I escape its curse by deliberately ignoring it? Are the cool-headed Murong Chu and the unpredictable Murong Fei truly as innocent and worthy of my affection as I believe? In this ancient land, can I escape the shackles of love once more...?
I wonder if "backtracking" is what you mean? I'm mistaken. Geography is so-so and needs to be improved... But the description of it is quite good.
I quite like the first part, maybe the handsome guy showed up, haha
This article is quite consistent with the previous one. I feel like you are much more proficient in writing it.
Baby, I admire you so much. You are so immeasurable. Come on, I support you as always.
Come on, come on, I'm looking forward to the follow-up
Ah, now I figure out what's going on, haha! Keep going…
Come on, the writing is good! I have saved it and will read it often! But the beginning is a bit confusing...
Come on! Looking forward to your finished product. I will come often. I also hope you can come and help me support me.
The writing is good, keep writing.
Not bad, this kind of thinking is very interesting.