Flirt with You Once More [Showbiz]

Good-looking(??ω??)??

Damn, I can't find my Weibo name.

Good looking (??ω??)?? Hehehehehe

Di, high school graduate card / Let's talk nonsense for now! / I saw this article about fifty days before the college entrance examination? Oh yes, I just can't control my hands series Started to like it very much! ! ! Because the character design is the kind of life-winner series that I like without being pretentious and overbearing! I really decided to read it before the college entrance examination because You used the college entrance examination idiom "accumulation destroys bones" I think Oho is a rare author of idioms and bangbang online articles And the writing style is indeed mature (at least it is very effective for a lot of online writers!) Then I was very happy and bought the full text It was later confirmed that you had indeed written the essay just after the college entrance examination. And... Judging from the language habits and various memes, I estimate that your total score is above 650 All in all, I can say that I have a very favorable impression of you personally?? / Comment on the article if you have little talent and knowledge/ The writing and narrative style are really good. I really like it too But... Maybe it was because I wanted to write an essay after the college entrance examination, which made me a little excited or rushed? Maybe I think your writing deserves better? I think ①Your character does not stand up The characters are not fleshed out I still can't accurately feel Shen Shu's character Especially your hero almost no image It feels like he is matching Piano Prince (I stand with Piano Prince too!) ② Many subtle details are not handled particularly well. It's just not mature enough (maybe I'm overdoing it, after all, it's actually pretty good) ③LBNL language style is monotonous The "big boss language style" mentioned above is throughout Everyone talks the same thing It's really not conducive to making the characters plump and vivid. This is a big reason why your character can't stand up Other online article authors generally don't have this problem Because their language style is not as obvious (and lovable) as yours At least I often can't tell who is speaking in a long conversation... This is my first time giving a long review which is actually not very long. I don't particularly understand where the focus should be. I can't provide you with an example one by one. But I really like you I also hope you can be better Maybe this is not your ambition (I am very happy if you have the ambition to be a swan [hao] hehehehehehe) That's okay Just be happy Hope to have the opportunity to become friends with you The pleasure is all mine.

Little Sparks, do you still remember that there is a side story here? [Sigh] It took me two days to finish this article, and I can't finish my homework QAQ

This article is really well written and overall makes me feel comfortable reading it! Why is no one watching?

After reading the previous articles, I found that I included two articles by the same author! I didn't read this fattening article until now The diplomat article is being pursued!

Really like Chris. Everyone needs some heavy things to grow up, but what Chris has probably experienced is a lover and guilt that he can't escape and can't hide from.

Looking forward to the follow-up episodes. Although I am not interested in Chris, it is not easy for Flag Ye to update so much at once. No need for red envelopes^_^

~(≧▽≦)/~Red envelope!