
School of Spirit Arts
灵术师学校
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 134k Words
- Genre
- Romance
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 8y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
44Chapters
38Favorites
8.0Score
481Clicks per chapter
12Comments
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Reader comments 11
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Hello, I have a little problem, please come back to the building╭(╯ε╰)╮
I'm so angry that I can't see the back.
Many chapters are locked...
Touching the head, the same person writing the paper passed by
I hate finals too╮( ̄▽ ̄"")╭
I guess July's grandma is from the Cao family, and the boss they will fight in the end is the sealed one from the Cao family (⊙v⊙)
By the way, the battle scenes can be more detailed, use a little rendering technique, and add some details, such as the battle in the forest, you can write how they fight in the forest, etc.
Sorry, sir, let me mention a small shortcoming that I personally think... The text of this article is a bit like the fairy tale books I read when I was a child. It is simple and straightforward. Although the subject matter is very novel, the reading experience may be affected somewhat. After all, many of the readers are adults. More detailed descriptions other than dialogue should polish it up a lot, and then the plot should be more twists and turns, and the bad guys should not be too typical (don't directly say evil eyes or the like, it is too obvious, and you can predict what will happen next).
... I was scared to death. I thought my data was displayed incorrectly. How could it be possible that there were so few collections and comments?!