Synopsis
That year, I made my home in the Cao residence. During Kangxi's southern inspection, I made a promise to someone beneath the plum trees and came to know someone else aboard a painted boat.
That year, I honed my skills on the grasslands. An arrow brought us together, yet my old friend did not recognize me.
That year, I wandered through the Forbidden City. Where did my heart truly belong?
That year, I was in the Beizi residence. Hidden blades and secret arrows were hard to guard against. In this treacherous world, who could stay untouched?
That year, I followed the army to Qinghai. Blood soaked the battlefield, yet I searched for the traces of true love.
That year, I lingered at the Imperial Ancestral Temple. Alas, our love was deep, but fate was shallow. The long years hurried us toward old age, and my old friend was gone.
That year, I spent the rest of my life in Jiangnan. My life's greatest wish brought both praise and blame, but at least my heart remained warm.
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Sometimes I can't agree with the heroine's character
I have a small suggestion. You can leave a line or paragraph between each line. You can see it clearly with the Jinjiang mobile version.
The author must have checked a lot of information before writing, but it was too blunt and hard to read. . .
Come and comment~ I like the beginning of the chapter very much. This writing style is very suitable for ancient Chinese poetry. Although as a science student, I don't know much about history, I can see that you read a lot of historical materials in order to write the article, and your attitude is very good. Pay attention to sentence fragmentation and be careful about some language issues, it will be better. Overall, it's pretty good, keep it up! I'm chasing you!
Well, Hongming was born to the direct Fu Jin, and Hongchun was born to the side Fu Jin. Did the author arrange it this way on purpose? Haha
Hey, look at the copy, it's a tragedy!