Hunting the Priest

The subject matter is good, but the plot is too weak. Can you revise it? There isn't just one hunter, there are others who can ask for help, and the ending ends with death, which is a bit baffling.

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I can't understand... The content is good... Concubine?... Don't like it...

Good story... But i do not like bad ending..

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