The Sunset Fades, but the Flower's Beauty Remains

Are you rewriting it?

Update soon, I really want to see it

It's full of twists and turns. It's really enjoyable to watch. Author's reply: Touch, thank you for your support~~ There will be an update, but the master has recently come to Mu Ming, so this may take a little longer, sorry for that! Happy New Year!!

It's fun~~~ Flying a kite and buying a couple's watch are so sweet

Damn it, it's already Chinese New Year and there is no update yet... I'm disappointed... But I still wish you a Happy New Year and all the best!!!! Author's reply: Maybe it will be updated after a while, thank you~~ I also wish you a happy new year and may all your wishes come true!!

What is the background music? It sounds really nice ~ Author's reply: Waiting for a Sunny Day by Cai Chunjia, I like it very much~~

Looking forward to the update, looking forward to the update!

Since the earth is round, the ending may not be the ending, but may be another beginning. The love of youth unfolded for an almost ridiculous reason. When he was a teenager, Yan Sichen was afraid that others would doubt his sexual orientation, so he asked to date the heroine Chi Xinyou. It was not because of her appearance, her background, or her inner nature, but because she was a female animal, which could be used to plug the gap in rumors. Faced with such a ridiculous reason, Chi Xinyou agreed. Why? Maybe she couldn't even explain it herself, and love in youth always sprouts unexpectedly, whether it should or shouldn't be, right or wrong, all the measurement standards from the adult world seem to be pale and feeble. They don't need reason, they don't need to think about the future, who makes them young. However, people have to grow up after all. After they separated due to various misunderstandings and doubts, even though they missed each other, when they met again after a few years, they were no longer as calm as before, and they lacked many impulses. Deliberately ignoring the truest feelings from deep inside made them seem to be walking on two parallel lines, missing many opportunities, and also hurting some people, such as Zhan Jichu. Although Zhan Jichu is the direct cause of the breakup of the male and female protagonists, it is not the fundamental reason. When he was young, Yan Sichen had a lot of confusion and hesitation about this relationship, and so did Chi Xin, so they should be grateful to Zhan Jichu, the so-called third party. Without his appearance, how could these two people become so clear about their own feelings? In this way, it is actually impossible to tell who is right and who is wrong, but the greatest feedback to love is not a conclusion of right or wrong, but that lovers eventually get married. No matter where you are, no matter how long we have been apart, you know that I love you. The author constantly inserts fragments of memories during the writing process, which is a good way to promote the development of the plot and express the emotions of the characters, but the author obviously does not grasp this writing technique properly enough. Many scenes appear messy in the author's writing and give people the feeling that the memories are just to explain the personnel background. It is recommended that the author put more effort into this aspect, and think about the purpose of writing this paragraph before writing, and make them the icing on the cake instead of adding rough details. Secondly, there are too many characters in the article, which gives people a dazzling feeling when they appear. It is recommended that the author eliminate some unimportant characters (that is, the legendary "walk-in") or mention them by title. Do not give names to individuals, which may easily make readers confused. In addition, when naming the characters in the article, you can choose some names with different styles, or distinguish them in form. For example, someone can be called ABB, someone can be called AB, and someone can be called ABC. This will make it easier for readers to identify and familiarize themselves with the article faster. Finally, I would like to talk about some flaws in the author's psychological description of the characters. When I was reading the article, I repeatedly saw the sentence "A trace of unknown emotions surged in my heart." This sentence often appeared in unnecessary places. Presumably the author does not understand his characters thoroughly enough or does not understand their relationships and emotional development carefully enough. This can also be seen from other places. I hope the author can think more about this aspect to make the characters' emotions more natural and realistic. That's it for the review, I wish the author will finish it soon, haha. Author's reply: I saw the long comment. I was so excited. He is indeed a good person~~ The analysis is very thorough, and I have been thinking about revising the article recently, so I haven't continued to update it, haha! Thank you~~

So great, so great! ~~

Happy New Year Come on