[New novel: The Function of Early Summer. Please add it to your favorites on the author's page.]
[Synopsis]
Only the dead can see the Grim Reaper...
He is the ruler of the demon realm, the foremost of all Grim Reapers. Yet she can see him, even though she isn't dead!
Her name isn't recorded in the Book of Death. She should have died before she was even born, so why is she still here? Or... does she not belong to this world at all?!
Who is she, really?
Ever since a car accident two years ago, the young Situ Lala has lost all her memories. She feels that her life has become “abnormal.” During a school trip, her friend Wu Tongmeng vanishes without a trace. While searching for her, Situ Lala encounters a mysterious young man... Then strange things begin happening one after another. Could they have something to do with her? What are the memories she's lost? And what conspiracy lies behind it all?
The truth is about to come to light...
Behind the memories lies the truth!
[New novel: The Function of Early Summer]
On Qixi Festival, their advisor leaves work early, hurrying home to drink the delicious soup his wife has made. The senior students are all busy going on dates, and even the cats and dogs by the flower beds beneath the lecture hall are paired up.
In the deserted lab, Cheng Xingyi runs into that aloof beauty.
Han Shu slips one hand into his pocket and lazily raises his eyes to look at her. “Aren't you spending the evening with your boyfriend?”
Cheng Xingyi: “I... don't have a boyfriend.”
“What about you?” she asks.
Han Shu answers in his usual languid, infuriating tone: “Neither do I.”
Relaxed in his posture, he adds as if without a care, “Why don't we make do and spend it together?”
Three seconds of silence.
“Senior,” Cheng Xingyi says hesitantly, “do you mean you don't have a boyfriend either?”
“...”
*
Cheng Xingyi once thought she'd done a good job of hiding her little crush.
That is, until Han Shu discovered her secret.
Han Shu falls unusually silent, his expression unreadable. “Are you sure this is a crush on me, and not a plan for revenge?”
“...?”
*
Xiangxing No. 1, a satellite independently designed, developed, and controlled by the students of Youli University, is successfully launched into space.
A reporter asks during an interview, “What inspired you to develop this satellite?”
Cheng Xingyi says, “To reach for the stars.”
Han Shu turns his gaze toward her. “Same here.”
Reach for the stars, then land in your heart.
“What do you think is the most romantic thing?”
“To fly with you to the end of the galaxy.”
Research / campus / unconventional unrequited love
Theme: Our destiny is in our own hands
★New article "Let Me Surrender" Marriage First, Love Later/Hidden Marriage/Sweet Words in Present Speech
Ning Fu first met Shi Huai Zhi at a company banquet.
The man stood in front of the window, with the top button of his shirt unbuttoned, looking towards her with unfathomable eyes. At that moment, she only thought of the snow-capped mountains.
Enchanting enough, yet extremely dangerous.
She was drunk and walked boldly towards the man.
After waking up, Ning Fu looked at the person lying next to him and remembered the absurdity of last night, so he packed up his things and ran away overnight.
After returning home, Ning Fu found that his family and his rival family were shaking hands and making peace, and even wanted to express their sincerity through marriage.
Ning Fu interrupted confidently: "Our country's Marriage Law stipulates that arranged marriages, purchased marriages and other behaviors that interfere with the freedom of marriage are prohibited, so——"
As soon as she raised her eyes, she saw Shi Huaizhi sitting there, looking at her with a half-smile: "Ms. Ning has done well in her professional courses. Can you tell me what is the definition of the crime of fraud in Article 266 of the Criminal Law?"
Ning Fu tied his knot: "So I... I think I can still save him."
The newly appointed president of MAE Group, Shi Huaizhi, is handsome and cold, demanding at work, unkind, and difficult to get close to the flower of the high mountain.
Ning Fu is just an unknown person in the translation department, and seems to have no connection with him.
Until one day, Ning Fu confronted him tit for tat at a department meeting because of a planning project, and they refused to give in.
Shi Huaizhi was sitting on the main seat with an expressionless face and cold eyes: "If you have any opinions about me, you can come to my office directly after the meeting is over."
Others sweated over Ning Fu and felt that Ning Fu was getting cold.
However, after the meeting, everyone saw their cold-blooded young CEO who was strategizing in the mall walking toward Ning Fu and asked as if nothing had happened: "Did you see my blue tie when I went out today?"
In the office, the floor-to-ceiling curtains were tightly closed and the lights were dim.
"Still angry with me?" The man leaned down slightly and pressed her against the edge of the desk. His voice was low and magnetic, "Mrs. Shi?"
-One day-I finished reading a large novel again, and I felt very smooth. Ps. "Promising with one's body" is always possible
Duel! Supplementary points, it seems like why the character "" is harmonized...
I like it, make up for it, come on, adults, and look forward to more interactions between Lala and His Highness! Write the second part quickly!
I like Fengdian very much! Not only because he is handsome and dedicated, but also because of his personality! It is not something ordinary people can do to give up their entire life and all their glory for Lala, but Jidian did it. He is willing to be the enemy of the whole world for the sake of Lala. I am so cute about him... I hope you can write a second part soon :-D
I chase
Come on, little Lala><I'm looking forward to it. I think I have watched it a long time ago =W=, and even forwarded it, but I still rarely watch it - I don't have time to TUT. I took some time today to finish reading the unfinished parts. By the way, I would like to give you a long review. Thank you for your support= ==+…
Detailed comments (actually just to make up the word count = =)——
The few chapters I read in the middle are very "premeditated", which shows that Lala, you have already thought a lot before writing. The article (please forgive me for not giving specific data = =) inspired me a lot. Usually when I conceive a chapter in a novel, I divide it into small pieces one by one, so that each chapter becomes its own whole and an independent story. As a result, every time I write the second chapter, I feel stuck with the first chapter. ——I think I've already said that in the last long review, right? Lala, your article is very coherent. At this time, I found the reason - because Lala did not conceive it like me. Lala, you connected several chapters together to form an extremely beautiful short story. Your article can be cut into short pieces. For example, in some of the middle chapters, Jiantongshoe deliberately framed Lala to start a sports competition, which resulted in Lala being injured. Then - karma, Jian successfully tasted the feeling of "jealousy"... (It made me happy to see it...)
In addition, Lala's articles have a sweet and girly flavor, which makes them relaxed and warm. Lala's description of details is also unique. In Chapter 13, Jie self-denies his feelings for Lala. Perhaps according to the general writing style of the author, there will be no further statement after that, leaving room for the reader's imagination. However, Lalayou put the finishing touch and said: "But, why does his heart tighten secretly whenever he thinks like this... It's as if a part of his soul resonates with the ups and downs of emotions, pushing him step by step into the abyss of eternal destruction!" This sentence cleverly denied the above words, which made me feel great.
In the previous article, I felt that Lala's description of the heroine was not clear and three-dimensional enough. But in this delicate romance novel, I felt the shyness of girlish feelings and the cuteness of 'lesbian'. Silly yet kind-hearted, heart-wrenchingly cute... (Here you are, I'm so sentimental!) In fact, I rarely like this kind of girls, because they don't belong to the goals I admire and pursue. I will never be a girl like them in the future... But isn't the delicacy occasionally revealed in such words the most beautiful part of the world? (Sorry, I picked up the wrong sentence = =) Lala probably hated that Du XX, but when she saw a passerby (= =I was really disrespectful enough) being "attacked" by a wraith (please forgive my lack of words), she still wanted to save XXX. This kind of heart may not be possible for me or more people, so to Lala, I express my worship. [Correct color] The heroine of this article, Lala (the author...), Should be very successful in shaping the heroine.
[Continue to read] Okay, La J, you really did have a premeditated plan... I just finished saying, "But, why does his heart tighten secretly every time he thinks like this... It seems that a part of his soul resonates with the ups and downs of emotions, pushing him step by step into the abyss of destruction!" This sentence = = and then the seal opened the ORZ... It is indeed a before and after care. However, the corresponding distance ORZ= =.
Then I complained about you, you are really evil and evil, and you are super suspected of abusing your male partner TOT~! I won't play with you~ [Pretend to be LOLI].
In addition. Lalanai's article... Is actually very emotional =W= In your article, you not only describe love, but also family and friendship. I have always hated girls taking the second leading role - heroine? One is enough. (Actually, someone dislikes this kind of person.) But in this novel, I don't dislike such a 'second heroine' (although it doesn't count = =). Just like Tomoyo and Sakura, I feel that the emotions between XX (sorry... I forgot their names) and 'Lala' are just like them, and cannot be blasphemed by mortal emotions... (Get out!) There is also the emotion between Zetsu and Jie. Zetsu has sacrificed so much just for Yu Jie's achievements. Maybe Jie will never understand this silent emotion. He will only accuse his brother of abandoning him in such a way. After all, Jie's heart is still like a child's... Immature, it's just that he was forced to be infected with the seeds of hatred. He is very sensitive, that's why he behaves so domineeringly when 'Lala' treats XX (male partner... I am indeed an amnesiac) - she just doesn't want to lose. It definitely made things happen, but it also ruined things at the same time. The two don't owe each other, but what would happen if Jie knew? In this relationship, I am afraid I will never be able to calculate who wins and who loses. Maybe Jue's original intention is very simple, but at the same time it is also stupid. Yes, Jie may be a so-called "waste" for the rest of his life. But it's better than being a child who has to accept hatred at just a few years old. Isn't it? This feeling is very complicated. Now that it has happened, you can only accept it silently. Because... I was never given a choice! ——This is a very sharp question. However, now that this is the case, so what? Lala's detailed description in this article is a model worthy of our reference. [Nod] [Actually, I just froze the chicken and smoked it when I saw your comment... A big cup from five hundred years ago = = Although it is true. . . ]
And there are really many emotional people. Ou Sangsang; Jue; Lala; Jie; Demon King; XX passerby... In short, there are many stories in this story of Lala Nai =W=.
... Then the ending is too poetic, but I don't have a wedding dress to wear. T T= =Hey, you are a gossip!
That's it... I've finished my review =A= and there are 1860 words in total... It seems like that.
I also want to print it, but I don't know how to pay it.
Have you gone up? Here I come. Count me in!
Everything about the writing is pretty good. There is nothing in particular that I would like to point out. The wording and grammar are still old-fashioned and you have to hone yourself, as are the details. Without further ado, let's give an example. Let's start with a boy flapping his wings. In fact, normally he doesn't need to lose so many feathers, otherwise it may be a sign of calcium deficiency. Although it is a rendering, it is actually okay to lose one or two hairs occasionally, and the visual depiction of one or two hairs can also be beautiful. After that, the feathers flutter like a butterfly flying, which is indeed beautiful at first glance, but the butterfly flying is completely different from the fluttering feathers. One of the reasons is that the wings are described as being very large, so the feathers are not small, and they are soft. It feels like the dragon has fallen, while the butterfly is trembling, which is relatively powerful and can be kept within a certain position.
Also, some statements should not be one sentence per line. If they do not need to be separated into separate paragraphs, do not break them. Do not deliberately "stand alone".
Situ Lala, haha, my colleague's nickname is Lala.
It's a pity. Although you said this article is weird, except for the usual picture at the beginning of the first chapter, the rest suddenly becomes lively. The mystery begins and ends in laughter, in the style of a Japanese cartoon. In fact, the author writes a relatively sunny story, but it only contains some secrets of the protagonist, the past, the God of Death, etc., Which does not mean that it is weird and suspenseful, and there is no thriller and horror. In this case, I will still be bored while reading, there is no sense of tension, only a little sense of curiosity, and this still doesn't work.
However, author, although your writing does not fit my type, there are still many readers who like your writing. Generally speaking, it is quite satisfactory, not too outrageous or new.
Because they are the first 3 articles, I will read them all, but they are really not my favorite type, so I won't read any more. The cover of the novel is not bad, I hope you can publish it as you wish, so I will write it here. If there is anything wrong, please point it out, thank you.
★New article "Let Me Surrender" Marriage First, Love Later/Hidden Marriage/Sweet Words in Present Speech Ning Fu first met Shi Huai Zhi at a company banquet. The man stood in front of the window, with the top button of his shirt unbuttoned, looking towards her with unfathomable eyes. At that moment, she only thought of the snow-capped mountains. Enchanting enough, yet extremely dangerous. She was drunk and walked boldly towards the man. After waking up, Ning Fu looked at the person lying next to him and remembered the absurdity of last night, so he packed up his things and ran away overnight. After returning home, Ning Fu found that his family and his rival family were shaking hands and making peace, and even wanted to express their sincerity through marriage. Ning Fu interrupted confidently: "Our country's Marriage Law stipulates that arranged marriages, purchased marriages and other behaviors that interfere with the freedom of marriage are prohibited, so——" As soon as she raised her eyes, she saw Shi Huaizhi sitting there, looking at her with a half-smile: "Ms. Ning has done well in her professional courses. Can you tell me what is the definition of the crime of fraud in Article 266 of the Criminal Law?" Ning Fu tied his knot: "So I... I think I can still save him." The newly appointed president of MAE Group, Shi Huaizhi, is handsome and cold, demanding at work, unkind, and difficult to get close to the flower of the high mountain. Ning Fu is just an unknown person in the translation department, and seems to have no connection with him. Until one day, Ning Fu confronted him tit for tat at a department meeting because of a planning project, and they refused to give in. Shi Huaizhi was sitting on the main seat with an expressionless face and cold eyes: "If you have any opinions about me, you can come to my office directly after the meeting is over." Others sweated over Ning Fu and felt that Ning Fu was getting cold. However, after the meeting, everyone saw their cold-blooded young CEO who was strategizing in the mall walking toward Ning Fu and asked as if nothing had happened: "Did you see my blue tie when I went out today?" In the office, the floor-to-ceiling curtains were tightly closed and the lights were dim. "Still angry with me?" The man leaned down slightly and pressed her against the edge of the desk. His voice was low and magnetic, "Mrs. Shi?"
-One day-I finished reading a large novel again, and I felt very smooth. Ps. "Promising with one's body" is always possible
Duel! Supplementary points, it seems like why the character "" is harmonized...
I like it, make up for it, come on, adults, and look forward to more interactions between Lala and His Highness! Write the second part quickly!
I like Fengdian very much! Not only because he is handsome and dedicated, but also because of his personality! It is not something ordinary people can do to give up their entire life and all their glory for Lala, but Jidian did it. He is willing to be the enemy of the whole world for the sake of Lala. I am so cute about him... I hope you can write a second part soon :-D
I chase
Come on, little Lala><I'm looking forward to it. I think I have watched it a long time ago =W=, and even forwarded it, but I still rarely watch it - I don't have time to TUT. I took some time today to finish reading the unfinished parts. By the way, I would like to give you a long review. Thank you for your support= ==+… Detailed comments (actually just to make up the word count = =)—— The few chapters I read in the middle are very "premeditated", which shows that Lala, you have already thought a lot before writing. The article (please forgive me for not giving specific data = =) inspired me a lot. Usually when I conceive a chapter in a novel, I divide it into small pieces one by one, so that each chapter becomes its own whole and an independent story. As a result, every time I write the second chapter, I feel stuck with the first chapter. ——I think I've already said that in the last long review, right? Lala, your article is very coherent. At this time, I found the reason - because Lala did not conceive it like me. Lala, you connected several chapters together to form an extremely beautiful short story. Your article can be cut into short pieces. For example, in some of the middle chapters, Jiantongshoe deliberately framed Lala to start a sports competition, which resulted in Lala being injured. Then - karma, Jian successfully tasted the feeling of "jealousy"... (It made me happy to see it...) In addition, Lala's articles have a sweet and girly flavor, which makes them relaxed and warm. Lala's description of details is also unique. In Chapter 13, Jie self-denies his feelings for Lala. Perhaps according to the general writing style of the author, there will be no further statement after that, leaving room for the reader's imagination. However, Lalayou put the finishing touch and said: "But, why does his heart tighten secretly whenever he thinks like this... It's as if a part of his soul resonates with the ups and downs of emotions, pushing him step by step into the abyss of eternal destruction!" This sentence cleverly denied the above words, which made me feel great. In the previous article, I felt that Lala's description of the heroine was not clear and three-dimensional enough. But in this delicate romance novel, I felt the shyness of girlish feelings and the cuteness of 'lesbian'. Silly yet kind-hearted, heart-wrenchingly cute... (Here you are, I'm so sentimental!) In fact, I rarely like this kind of girls, because they don't belong to the goals I admire and pursue. I will never be a girl like them in the future... But isn't the delicacy occasionally revealed in such words the most beautiful part of the world? (Sorry, I picked up the wrong sentence = =) Lala probably hated that Du XX, but when she saw a passerby (= =I was really disrespectful enough) being "attacked" by a wraith (please forgive my lack of words), she still wanted to save XXX. This kind of heart may not be possible for me or more people, so to Lala, I express my worship. [Correct color] The heroine of this article, Lala (the author...), Should be very successful in shaping the heroine. [Continue to read] Okay, La J, you really did have a premeditated plan... I just finished saying, "But, why does his heart tighten secretly every time he thinks like this... It seems that a part of his soul resonates with the ups and downs of emotions, pushing him step by step into the abyss of destruction!" This sentence = = and then the seal opened the ORZ... It is indeed a before and after care. However, the corresponding distance ORZ= =. Then I complained about you, you are really evil and evil, and you are super suspected of abusing your male partner TOT~! I won't play with you~ [Pretend to be LOLI]. In addition. Lalanai's article... Is actually very emotional =W= In your article, you not only describe love, but also family and friendship. I have always hated girls taking the second leading role - heroine? One is enough. (Actually, someone dislikes this kind of person.) But in this novel, I don't dislike such a 'second heroine' (although it doesn't count = =). Just like Tomoyo and Sakura, I feel that the emotions between XX (sorry... I forgot their names) and 'Lala' are just like them, and cannot be blasphemed by mortal emotions... (Get out!) There is also the emotion between Zetsu and Jie. Zetsu has sacrificed so much just for Yu Jie's achievements. Maybe Jie will never understand this silent emotion. He will only accuse his brother of abandoning him in such a way. After all, Jie's heart is still like a child's... Immature, it's just that he was forced to be infected with the seeds of hatred. He is very sensitive, that's why he behaves so domineeringly when 'Lala' treats XX (male partner... I am indeed an amnesiac) - she just doesn't want to lose. It definitely made things happen, but it also ruined things at the same time. The two don't owe each other, but what would happen if Jie knew? In this relationship, I am afraid I will never be able to calculate who wins and who loses. Maybe Jue's original intention is very simple, but at the same time it is also stupid. Yes, Jie may be a so-called "waste" for the rest of his life. But it's better than being a child who has to accept hatred at just a few years old. Isn't it? This feeling is very complicated. Now that it has happened, you can only accept it silently. Because... I was never given a choice! ——This is a very sharp question. However, now that this is the case, so what? Lala's detailed description in this article is a model worthy of our reference. [Nod] [Actually, I just froze the chicken and smoked it when I saw your comment... A big cup from five hundred years ago = = Although it is true. . . ] And there are really many emotional people. Ou Sangsang; Jue; Lala; Jie; Demon King; XX passerby... In short, there are many stories in this story of Lala Nai =W=. ... Then the ending is too poetic, but I don't have a wedding dress to wear. T T= =Hey, you are a gossip! That's it... I've finished my review =A= and there are 1860 words in total... It seems like that.
I also want to print it, but I don't know how to pay it.
Have you gone up? Here I come. Count me in!
Everything about the writing is pretty good. There is nothing in particular that I would like to point out. The wording and grammar are still old-fashioned and you have to hone yourself, as are the details. Without further ado, let's give an example. Let's start with a boy flapping his wings. In fact, normally he doesn't need to lose so many feathers, otherwise it may be a sign of calcium deficiency. Although it is a rendering, it is actually okay to lose one or two hairs occasionally, and the visual depiction of one or two hairs can also be beautiful. After that, the feathers flutter like a butterfly flying, which is indeed beautiful at first glance, but the butterfly flying is completely different from the fluttering feathers. One of the reasons is that the wings are described as being very large, so the feathers are not small, and they are soft. It feels like the dragon has fallen, while the butterfly is trembling, which is relatively powerful and can be kept within a certain position. Also, some statements should not be one sentence per line. If they do not need to be separated into separate paragraphs, do not break them. Do not deliberately "stand alone". Situ Lala, haha, my colleague's nickname is Lala. It's a pity. Although you said this article is weird, except for the usual picture at the beginning of the first chapter, the rest suddenly becomes lively. The mystery begins and ends in laughter, in the style of a Japanese cartoon. In fact, the author writes a relatively sunny story, but it only contains some secrets of the protagonist, the past, the God of Death, etc., Which does not mean that it is weird and suspenseful, and there is no thriller and horror. In this case, I will still be bored while reading, there is no sense of tension, only a little sense of curiosity, and this still doesn't work. However, author, although your writing does not fit my type, there are still many readers who like your writing. Generally speaking, it is quite satisfactory, not too outrageous or new. Because they are the first 3 articles, I will read them all, but they are really not my favorite type, so I won't read any more. The cover of the novel is not bad, I hope you can publish it as you wish, so I will write it here. If there is anything wrong, please point it out, thank you.