[Legend of the White Snake] Miss Xu of Qiantang (GL)

Madam, can you revise the chapter of Red Lock and see if it can be released? I want to see the plot in it [crying]

It's actually BE! I haven't read BE's article for a long time, and I was caught off guard by a handful of broken glass.

What's going on with Lishan's mother?

It's a waste of money to watch the ending. It's not that I can't accept the tragic ending, but after Xu Xian is raped, it should be able to develop into a tragedy. I insist on getting the two of them back together as before, and then have this wonderful battle ending. At the same time, it also inexplicably portrays Lishan Mother and Guanyin as sinister characters. If we want to create this image, we should use a few chapters to lay it out, completely destroying the established impression.

I actually bought all of it before reading this chapter. It was so bad. Would a normal woman accept someone who raped her like this? In addition to the problems with Xu Xian's psychological process, Lingcao's psychological transition is also inexplicable. There are so many previous scenes that lay out resentment, and then just use a simple jealousy to make it go away. Is there something wrong with the author's brain circuit?

Is this forgiven? ? ?

. . . . . I can't believe I spent money on such a heart-wrenching article. . . . . . .

Ending: A successful decision means that Bai Suzhen will never be able to achieve enlightenment and become an immortal. It will also waste the rest of her life, and even lead to her death, and she will never be able to love anyone again. This is the most cruel way of retaliating against another person that I have ever seen. As expected of being cruel and ruthless!

It's very interesting, but, wow, please add a sequel, this ending will make me cry to death ()

Heartache. The first GL article, such a sad ending. I still want to thank my wife for her good writing and giving me such a great experience.