The Truth About the World, as I Know It

Ah, isn't it updated? It's very beautiful.

Coming from other articles, I wish you happiness!

Awesome, I was impressed by the original poster.

The author is very happy. Take a look and make some suggestions. 1. This article should be a plot flow, so write it according to the plot-oriented online novel. Don't write too many inner feelings and monologues, as well as various emotions and life thoughts. Except to directly advance the plot, stop describing the psychology of the protagonist. For example, for this chapter, it is enough to keep at most one-third. 2. The perspective is a bit confusing when writing. Basically, there are several Li Rans in each paragraph. From the perspective of the protagonist, he can be used instead, or simply omitted. In Jinjiang, readers have slightly higher requirements for writing. On the premise of telling the story clearly, the author's writing is also required to be simple and brisk. For plot novels, everything is to serve the plot. For example: Li Ran thought back on his mediocre life and replied, "I haven't learned anything, I don't know anything, and now I'm just using my experience to get by!" The voice revealed uncontrollable disappointment, "Oh, it's another worm who is just messing around." Li Ran was stunned: "I don't know." The man sighed, "Another vulgar person!" My writing skills are also quite poor, so the author can use this as a reference. Don't directly describe the psychological changes of the characters over and over again, try to convey the information through movements, expressions, language, etc. As for paragraphing, if the perspective is clear, paragraph length won't be a big issue. Come on

Now that I'm here, I'll take a closer look. Wouldn't it be better to give a few suggestions than to simply cheer? The first one involves the segmentation issue just mentioned downstairs. When it comes to paragraphing, it is usually after you have expressed a complete meaning. It can be cut off. It is recommended to separate sections with a blank line. Then, the language is very simple, but the logical sequence is not particularly clear. In fact, I can't sort it out myself, haha. Finally, it's great to figure out what you want to write, what you want to express, what you want to pursue, and be able to convey this to readers.

The author writes very carefully, so I would like to give you some advice: Don't make the paragraphs too long. Everything else can be improved slowly.

Come on, I came here from another article, wish you happiness