A General's Triumph

Magnificent! Great writing! By the way, I really like Wu Zetian and Princess Taiping from that period!

Wonderful and wonderful ~ Shen's history is also very good and he is very knowledgeable. Nai's writing is very atmospheric and sad~ I just like this type of writing.

Still crawl over The writing is good, concise and gorgeous, but the conciseness is not accurate in some places and is a bit stiff. The main line is not clear.

Don't be depressed. Really well written. The writing style is very sophisticated and the narrative is concise. You can write longer and update slowly. There will definitely be more and more readers.