
The Villainous Young Master's Daddy Wants to Win Back His Wife [Book Transmigration]
恶少奶爸要追妻[穿书]
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.4M Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Updated
- 7y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
300Chapters
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10.0Score
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10.9kClicks per chapter
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Some parts made me a little shocked, so I jumped over and watched it, but it was fine. QAQ's true feelings are so slow, I almost couldn't watch it anymore.
Has the stepmother come to save Madoka?
No, I don't think you are nagging at all. I think you are very sincere. In fact, when you say you cry, it is not because you are weak, but because sincerity can be easily hurt. If you write sincerely, you will pay special attention to it. This is human nature. Many authors' writings are not good to read, and this is also because they are too conceited and do not show their sincerity. It is very comfortable, but it is also insincere. In fact, writing is not easy. Everyone can talk nonsense, but when it comes to actually completing a work, most people can't do it. In fact, I feel that you are still in the stage where you are taking things lightly but it is important. This is a good thing, because now you are familiar with the knife in your hand. It is always good to swing it a few more times. Growth is very fast at this stage, and it has not yet reached the most difficult bottleneck period. Let's talk about other things later when you can gradually become more relaxed. I think you are a little anxious now. Compared with the real top online romance writers, you are still a student. When there were no online novels about ten years ago, there were those small romance books. Look at how they can write an extremely bloody subject so that people want to read it. This is the mastery of writing. Although those authors have generally become some kind of craftsmen who only focus on productivity, this profound foundation is worthy of admiration. I hope you get better and better, blessings.
I have also done a lot of reading, and my current job is to deal with words, but I am not writing novels, so some things are connected by analogy. I can understand the difficult choices and careful carvings you put into writing some parts. There are chapters that you wrote very happily, and there are also chapters that you wrote very irritably, so I admire you for persisting, because I feel that you may have written the novel out of interest at the beginning, but after the novel progressed and Ah Qi left, it entered a very difficult and deep water area. It was entirely because of your persistence that you did not admit defeat that allowed you to continue completing it, so I give you a big thumbs up. Many of the authors I like fell down here. I have always felt that those who write smoothly have some mysterious power speaking through their hands. Only when you slowly structure the design and find a balance between literature and fun can you complete your own work, and it is your own thing. I was very busy some time ago, otherwise I would like to talk in the comment area, because I know that the author actually feels a sense of loneliness after the text is published, especially when the writing is not smooth and the foreshadowing is laid. I would really like readers' feedback. Unfortunately, I don't have time. It's over in a blink of an eye. It's a bit regretful that I didn't accompany you all the way to the end. In short, you are already good at writing stories, but the routines are a bit too tight, just some common nonsense. You can try it and write it in several ways. The other things are completely sufficient at this stage. I believe you can write better now on some unfamiliar parts, but you must control your desire to make major changes. But being able to write so many words should scare you. I also have some suggestions for you. I think you should not take it too seriously. Because Wen Yimingzhi, I can still see that such people will get sick easily, so take good care of yourself.
That little beggar when you were drunk?
Waiting for the update~2333333
I can't bear it anymore. My stomach hurts from laughing?
Hahaha, red and hot, in a trance, hahahaha, hiccups
Come on, the main attack↖(^ω^)↗Come on the author↖(^ω^)↗Come on~
Congratulations to the author for the great completion~(╯з╰) Mo Mo Mo~ I love it so much