A Perfect Life [Quick Transmigration]

Her father can live for thousands of years. What kind of cultivation?

"Although the Luo family has been ordinary people for generations (that remnant soul said it unilaterally)" The above is the original text. Can it be changed to: Although the remnant soul said that the Luo family has been ordinary people for generations. The order has been changed, but it does not affect reading at all, and it does not feel like an expository text. The author needs to practice his writing skills. I bought this article because the creativity attracted me.

After I wrote it, it didn't come out of the system? ? ?

In the last chapter, it was said that the heroine thought wrongly that the son of destiny was not so bad and finally avenged the Luo family; in this chapter, it turned out that all this was her self-hypnosis to show that she was a good person, and the final death together was also because of the backlash... Then why write two chapters? Why write it twice? Can't it be explained clearly once? When I thought that I had misunderstood her, she turned out to be so strong-willed, I analyzed it from the beginning with a long paragraph and shot back...

Is that the protagonist of another book?

Looks good, come on↖(^ω^)↗

It was at the peak of her integration stage. This is broken

Where is the author? Have you given up?←_←

La la la la, the style will also change

Hahahaha, the explosion from the girl control