HP: You'll Regret This

Wuhu! After reading so many HP fics, this is my favorite! Girls should be independent and self-reliant!

Awesome! ! ! Let's give my wife a try first! ?( ????` ) Speaking of the conflict between F4 and Snape, one of the most obvious differences is that their bottom lines are different. The bottom line for the foursome is the werewolf and hanging incidents, one directly endangering life and the other a public humiliation. And in the case of Snape's magic, which is a bug that cannot be broken without knowing the counter-curse, it has not caused irreversible damage to F4 in 7 years, let alone life-threatening. Not to mention that he knew Lupine was a werewolf, which was never revealed either in school or during his time as a Death Eater, even though he hated F4 so much. In contrast, as an ordinary person, would you rather study with someone like F4, who is arrogant, hurts others at will, and has a very low bottom line, or with someone like Snape, who treats you as nothing if you don't mess with him? Of course, this does not mean that F4 is a bad person, but at least until the sixth grade, when he was 16 years old, F4 was disrespectful, egotistical, arrogant, and without any sense of proportion. Besides, Lao Deng is actually a normal person with shortcomings and advantages. He is neither a perfect great man nor a politician with evil hands and evil heart. As a principal, he allowed Hagrid to raise dangerous creatures, and took the initiative to bring dangers (three-headed dogs) into the school, and indulged werewolves (there was no adult to supervise Lupin during those days), and his handling of the victims (Snape) was undoubtedly derelict in his duties. But as the leader of the anti-Voldemort organization, he is undoubtedly excellent. He tried his best and tried all methods, and also sacrificed many Voldemorts who were indeed eliminated. When it comes to saying that he brought conflicts into school, I think more of it because he was not good at handling conflicts as a principal when he was a parent. Harry had no choice at that time. After all, the savior was in Hogwarts, and the Ministry of Magic would not allow Harry to drop out of school. Obviously Voldemort's affairs were much more important than the conflicts in the academy.

It's really great, really. If I, who have read a lot of HP fanfiction, have the happiest day, it would be today. Here, I saw this book. I am extremely grateful to the author. Thank you very much. In fact, when reading the book "Harry Potter" today, for a children's literature work that narrates the story from a first-person perspective, we cannot deny that it is inevitably subjective. At the same time, because most of its audience, whether it is our generation as children at that time, or every subsequent generation of children who yearn for the colorful magic school and magical world, they are in the ignorant period of shaping life values. They do not yet have firm three views, rich experience, and standards for judging right and wrong. At that time, it was difficult for us to find the vague and obscure mistakes in the life trajectory from a children's classic. Of course, this is also normal, just like adolescent children showing middle-class qualities in the world outside of hot-blooded comics or online novels (I was very middle-class back then) (face covering). I did not have a correct understanding of the bullying and isolation that Voldemort and Snape had suffered back then (believe me, even a magic school, as long as it is a school, the first and most important thing imparted is not just knowledge) and I did not see the fact that the four Gryffindors were wrapped up in the sugar-coating of pranks and bullied the school. I believe that if there really is a magic school, the author must have belonged to Gryffindor if he was in a magic school, a true, upright, just, and brave Gryffindor. This is what I can always feel from the unswerving resistance of this book, and I am inspired to read it over and over again, just like seeing Mary's maturity, responsibility, rise and self-reliance. Having said so many emotions, if I don't review the author's book properly, my review will be considered unfinished (laughs). The author's big book is basically not OOC compared to other main characters in fan fiction, which I admire very much. After all, the same personality corresponds to similar experiences, and creating another person's soul out of thin air in the story pattern will face huge changes, and changes will collide with each other to create an unknown ending. It is already remarkable to be able to grasp the fate of most people. If there is something wrong with me, I feel that there is something wrong with Dumbledore's excessive favoritism towards the foursome and his intolerance in taking the overall situation first. After all, Mary and the quartet were all students of Dumbledore, and the quartet were not valued by Dumbledore as future important members of the Order of the Phoenix when they were students. Of course, Dumbledore is the wise old man in the whole story. If you want to perfectly reproduce this, I believe that even JK Rowling today will have difficulty doing it. Also, I have a bit of a big idea about the private life of magic schools. I believe that a few decades ago, this aspect was still relatively conservative, so I guess there will be unwed pregnancies, but adolescent boys such as Remus Lupin, Sirius Black and James Potter will not be too rude verbally. Everything else I personally feel is pretty good. The writing style of the article is actually very consistent with this article. It would be better if it could express a little more, such as Mary's psychological changes and conflicts as an adult after the tragedy, and the process of rebirth and establishing ambitious plans after the disaster. My personal suggestion is to use a little stream of consciousness in portraying the psychology. In addition, in fact, I think that after suffering such unfair treatment and tragic setback, Mary, as an ordinary person, should have responded to other people who were sheltered and unaware of the situation. After all, everyone, even if they are not saints, has a dark and painful side. However, whether it was her reaction to Lily Evans when changing dormitories or her reaction to other people in the lounge, it felt a bit lacking in the suffering of being in misfortune but facing the light. This should be a normal reaction. There is also a vague affection for Snape in the later period, which also appears a little inexplicably. After all, Mary, who is facing political pressure and has a family, should have had a lot of real contact with the world. She is a hawkish politician in the Ministry of Magic, and has firm beliefs and goals. These must have a firm basis in reality, that is, she is in it and has a strong sense of participation. Therefore, she will never treat people in this world as paper people from the beginning like the heroines in other fanfics (I have to say that Mary is a breath of fresh air among heroines in HP fanfics). After all, people in stories and people in reality are always different. Therefore, for Snape, a character loved by many readers, Mary, who has had more contact with him, should not have a very serious empathic effect on him. Therefore, feelings like loss seem a little thin and prominent without the plot background. Then there is no big problem. In the end, although I raised so many questions, believe me, I was undoubtedly pleasantly surprised and amazed by this book. Youth and ignorance are never the wrong reasons for committing crimes, and youth should not be darkened by tragedy. After all, giving advice and criticism to an author's big book is like picking a thorn in a fish with few spines. Fish bones are of course inedible, but without fish bones a fish cannot stand upright. In fact, as an article with correct views and introspection, it has emotions and a soul. As readers, to feel its gist is to understand the soul of this article. To sum up, reading JK Rowling's "Harry Potter" made me enjoy happiness in my childhood; reading the author's HP fan fiction gave me newer reflections, more understanding, and better appreciation as an adult. Thank you dear author:) Finally, I pay tribute to everyone who generates electricity for love and generates electricity correctly. Thank you very much.

It's quite a magical article. It's good to skip the original work and just read it as a refreshing article. However, Lion House fans should read it with caution. Although Black, Dungeon and Black Marauders are both wrong, it is a bit biased. It whitewashes some things that are clearly not lawful and neutral. I recommend Snake House fans to read it. It will make you feel better after reading it (?) I am a Hogwarts fan and I am fearless:)

It's pretty good, you don't have to go through all 7 years of plot. I also feel that the plot of Harry's first year is purely Rowling's attempt to test the waters, setting up a maze for the savior and the guinea pig to walk through. Although the writing is not bad, compared with the later ones, the sheer thickness of the book is much worse. The professor is still dead and the plot is irreversible. Inheriting an academic legacy is also a good idea. There is an HP article saying that Draco is the professor's godson and should receive an inheritance, but many of them disappeared mysteriously. It turns out that the professor had a biological son who was acquired by Lao Fu in order to solve his emotional problems. . .

It's a really cool and innovative hp fanfic

This is the real heroine story, awesome plus

So awesome! ! ! ! The heroine works really hard

It was recommended, and the author's comment was very refreshing. I also felt very happy, and I felt very good about it.

It chilled me that Old Deng could not act impartially, but then I thought about it, if I were him, leading an organization that desperately needed new blood and whose image must be positive without any stain on the Death Eaters, I would handle it the same way he did. When it comes to school bullying, I have a deep understanding of it. Preschool and elementary school were complete hell for me, which caused my personality to darken drastically. Fortunately, my classmates in junior high school were gentle and kind, otherwise I would not have entered Hufflepuff in Pottermore. [Thank you, sorry, and it's okay are the common mantras for everyone. ] According to relevant professional research reports, the age when a person truly grows up and can consider others is 25 years old. Before that, most people are very selfish and individualistic. There was once a group of 3-year-old children who were fighting with each other, and they became more serious while playing. One child was given a bucket of toilet paper [used toilet paper in the toilet], and the others took the opportunity to beat him. Now that child is still living in a mental hospital. Because the perpetrator was too young and could not file a case, the incident was eventually settled. In short, nothing happened to the child who caused the accident.