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This ending is so frustrating. I thought the protagonist would get better and better, but then I just hoped that he would become bad, become very bad, and then explode and cause trouble. It is better than the current unclear ending without any explanation. This ending is really difficult for me to watch at a glance. . . . . In any case, if you do something wrong and you have to pay the price for it, it is better to let the protagonist and the system die together. In the end, letting the protagonist die is too much. When I saw it, I felt that I was not surprised by anything he did. I read it a long time ago but didn't finish it. As I continued reading it, I thought it was a pretty good fanfic. I saw Natsume reaching its peak and then hitting rock bottom in the last chapter, as well as Aoki's ending after the protagonist left... Forget it, Natsume was still very good. Except for Ao, I felt sad about the ending. Whether you call me sentimental or pretentious, I feel uncomfortable, so I have to say it, otherwise I will feel aggrieved.

. . . . . . . After reading it, I got the feeling that the author is really stupid. Whether it's a cute joke about one's own mother, or a comment that's not positive or serious in replying to the reader's jokes, the facts that are unfriendly to the reader's own protagonist cannot be adapted. Can't you understand why the author wrote this fanfic, out of love for the fanfic? Interested? I can't feel it at all. No matter how I look at it, it looks like "suddenly there is a great idea that troubles the protagonist's mind", so I casually pull over "the animation works that I like/are interested in" as the stage/props, and start the protagonist's three terrible and unlucky lives of cheating. The fact that the protagonist is not completely depressed or perverted is really thanks to the author's silly idea of ​​"firmly believing that she is her biological mother" and "my Brother Fa has straight views". To be honest, the setting of passers-by is quite interesting, although the text at the beginning is completely out of tune. It reads as if it is unrealistic, like half-dreaming and half-awake during a nap on a hot summer day. It is difficult to penetrate deeply and has no sense of substitution. It is all supported by the setting and my love for the Kinomoto brothers and sisters. The one that I can get into better is the world of Natsume. Although the author has repeatedly claimed that he is not good at writing about emotions, the interaction between Fa Ge and Chang Jingsi is unexpectedly cpp-like. It is not fussy, not too sticky, and can touch and tickle readers' hearts. It's probably the kind of state where "the feelings of both parties are not clear, but the aura is harmonious and loving, which makes people's hearts beat, and they especially want them to fall in love." If the author didn't mean it, then it should be the author's innate skills, or the kind of talent that people are beautiful without knowing it. Unexpectedly, at the end of the unit, the author activated another innate skill: laughing and joking, zapping the reader's mind without even realizing it. Or you know it but don't care, you will easily lose fans like this. After all, the people and things depicted in the previous article are quite likable, but in the end it is cruel, stripping out the bloody reality and forcing it on the readers. I want to say that people who have watched Natsume don't know enough about what kind of person Jingsi is like? What the author writes about is obviously the author's characters. If it were to be OOC, it would be already OOC. Readers also like the characters written by the author. In the end, they have to pull out the "original work" and show it. What you wrote is a fanfic, not the original work, so what's the point? I really can't understand the author's intention, and the author's performance is so lighthearted. I'm really embarrassed to think too much about the "author's deeper meaning." The last world, like the sky of 19th-century London, is always cast with an unpleasant shadow. Fa Ge seems to be wandering on the edge of the world, not a passerby but a passerby. What the readers see is an original line with Fa Ge as the core after the world of the "protagonist" has been separated. The fan setting has no meaning in this copy. Different from the first world, Brother Fa is a real stranger in the first world, but he is still tied to the people around him. In the last world, Brother Fa is not a stranger. Although he has de facto connections with other people, he is like a wandering ghost. There are traces of him in this world. People around him know him, but there is no place for him. Even the final death was to complete the author's setting of three consecutive kills, and his death was meaningless. Fa Ge is a complete tragedy.

. . . . That is to say, due to system errors, Legitimate, who had psychological problems, was stabbed when he wanted to let go of his heart and heal, and Legitimate was completely broken. In this case, rebinding is all a joke when it comes to reforming Legitimate and turning him back into the good guy he was before. People are no longer human beings who can make amends and corrections so easily. Moreover, they have been bound and re-experienced again and again. I think he is a saint if Legitimate does not become a black man.

I've finished reading it. Ah, I actually really like the subject matter, but the ending is a bit of a pity. Wenxiang is so good.

The system transmits data incorrectly... Isn't that their fault? It's really nice that the main system is destroyed :)

Wei Tai ah, the two of us are really good together

Weitai is still chasing Fafa? It's not easy for the two of them to have been together for so many years...

Hahahahahahahahahahaha I really took the name Weitai, System 999 is so cute

Taitai's true love for Fa Ge 233

I just have one question: where's the cat? ! ! ! ! !