Dawn Dreams of Immortality (Reborn)

To be honest, if the flower of the heroine is really planted on Song Xuanmo in the end, I really feel that it is a pity for the heroine. I feel that Song Zhen is a scumbag, inhumane, and there is no happiness in being with him.

The male protagonist was a scumbag in his previous life! If so, the heroine is really mean

It's very special, and the rendering is good, but it made a fatal mistake. First-person novels cannot use God's perspective, because the female protagonist's perspective does not know what others are doing or thinking. This is the basic principle of first-person novels.

Bailu Academy... Bailu Academy...

To be fair, this article is different from other rebirth articles, it is really good-looking. I will not delete the collection.

It is recommended not to jump between third person and first person. The perspective is very strange.

I have read so many rebirth novels, and I feel that this one written by the author moved me the most. There is no so-called golden finger, and there is no too gorgeous accumulation. Although there are still deficiencies in the handling of details and plot, the indifferent narration allows people to see the truth and helplessness. The helplessness of Mr. Shengxue is real and sad. It is not limited to love, but always focuses on growth after rebirth. The author's writing style is also very good, and the integration of the environment and the character's mood and destiny is brilliant. I am very lucky to come across this article.

I still think it would be better if the heroine died. The ending is still a bit unacceptable. But this is my personal preference.

Damn it, I actually like Song Xuanmo?!

The writing is good and novel. The heroine finally no longer seems to be cheating all the time. The important thing is to grow.