[Anime Crossover] My Shinsengumi Chief Is a Night Rabbit

The lady who presses her claws and plays with a sword is so cute!

It feels crappy. . . . . .

I want to ask my wife where the group number is! ! ! I want to watch the extras! ! !

Why didn't I understand it at the end?

I saw some comments saying that this article has no depth or is written in a novice way, so I just wanted to say a few words. It is true that this article does not have a very meticulous and detailed narrative, but from the very beginning, the tone of this article is relaxed, and the same relaxed and simple text is obviously very suitable. If such a writing style suddenly appears in a description similar to ancient prose, is it appropriate? I think there is no best, only the most suitable. If you insist on this point and say this is a novice article, I don't agree. What is the definition of Xiaobaiwen? In addition to the writing style, what is more important is the plot and depth. For fan fiction, I think the so-called depth refers to the degree of restoration of the character and the degree of integration of the self-created protagonist. The former is easy to understand, and no one will want to read a story that is too bad. The latter refers to the rationality of the protagonist's personality, which means that in some aspects, such as warmth Characteristics such as softness, strength, and indifference cannot be too much, otherwise the character will be seriously flattened. Think about it, how can a novel that desperately highlights how cute or gentle the heroine is be not Xiaobai? And after these two points are achieved, in fact, as long as there is interaction, it can be called a plot. No one can deny the role of daily life in novels. Readability; in addition, it is the rhythm of the article, which is a very important factor in determining whether it is a good article. If it is as long and smelly as an old lady's footbinding, it will make people feel boring and irritated. However, if the rhythm is too fast, the plot development will appear unnatural. The former will make people abandon the article, and the latter will make people feel unnatural. The latter reduces the readability of the article; secondly, IQ is also very important. For example, some Marisu novels obviously ignore the existence of the IQ of human readers. Perhaps it is to show the power of the heroine and the author cannot afford such a setting, so he can only significantly reduce the IQ of other characters in the article. Judging from the points written above, I think this article is definitely not a white article. The characters do not have OOC. If I think there is, I think it is because a thousand readers have a thousand honmaru in their hearts. After all, no one knows the exact reaction of the swordsmen after losing their master or being flirted with by their master. Furthermore, the heroine Su is reasonable. Does anyone really feel that there are a lot of surprises? Maybe it has something to do with the relaxed tone of this article. If it is a very serious drama style article, this kind of setting is really inappropriate, but this article is not. Why don't you talk about Gintama if you have an opinion? Furthermore, the existence of swords is inherently unscientific, and there is actually no conflict in worldviews. The same principle applies to Qi Shen's article, stop talking nonsense, it's simply annoying. But later on, I was a little confused about the heroine's health. When I traveled to the future Honmaru, the heroine mentioned at the end "I will never let such a future happen." However, in the pseudo-extra, the same result still happened, and I felt that the final apology was meaningless. A new question arises here: Why is Tang Yan unwilling to return to his home planet? What was the reason why you delayed going back until absolutely necessary? What if you take some time to go back? Hmm, I can't figure it out. But I know that there was a gap of seven days between chapters 50 and 51, and ten days between chapters 52 and 53, and then they ended in succession (smile). Is this the reason why I feel disconnected? Also, the pace at the end of the later period is indeed a bit faster. In the early stage, the heroine's life experience is quite weak. Although I know that she was a slave and a person with a story, that's all. In the later stage, it feels like trying to stuff a person into a smaller cabinet. It is a bit crowded, and I always feel that the focus is on the heroine's life experience, rather than the interaction with the knife. There is no relationship in one or two chapters, but there is not much to watch for several chapters in a row. In fact, I don't care too much about the author's update time, but I still hope that the gaps can be overcome. Finally, I really enjoyed reading this article. I even stayed up late to finish reading Qi Shen's article (嘤). I also liked and looked forward to reading the beginning of the author's next article. It would be great if I could update it more frequently, eh. (Bihart

I thought it was time to write a long review to DaDa after following the author for such a long time. However, my language organization ability is limited and I can only write down my own feelings. The first article I read was a system article by Gintama. To be honest, I have never been used to system articles. However, DaDa's article kept me reading and I still enjoyed it. I am very happy. The first time I wrote a comment to Dada was about my experience of eating dirt. Now that I think about it, it was really funny. After that, I kept following Dada's article. Later, I became obsessed with Qi Shen and when I searched for fan fiction, I found the article you wrote about Qi Shen and thought it was great! ! Later, after the Death God story was finished, I suddenly fell into the trap of Sword Man again. Then when I was searching for fan fiction, I found this article about Da Da. After knowing that Da Da was going to be in V, I decided to take it up because this is your first article to be in V. When I first read this article, I thought about chasing Da Da for so long. I have finished this article and I will write a long review for you, but because I am very busy and my language expression and organizational skills are really poor, I can only comment at the level of a primary school student. Please don't dislike me. 23333 I will always be with you and wait for the next article. Give me a call! ! ! ! !

It's finally over! ∑0^0Sorry for being so late ~ QAQ, please forgive me, congratulations on the candy🍭_(′□`‖∠)_

Finished with flowers~ It's so sudden. I've been busy reading it for a few days and found that it's finally finished. OMG~

Finished spreading flowers ~ I'm so ashamed, I haven't made any comments, I only subscribed.

Finish with flowers ( ' - ' * )