Percival

I said, why do you want such an ending? Why don't you write about Harry ascending to power as the real Dark Lord and insisting on upholding that weird justice? You told me at the beginning of the copy that this is a darkening?! The beginning of the writing was so good, it made me think that Harry would inherit his beloved father's great career, ascend to the throne, and reach the pinnacle of life. Grindelwald loved him, but in the end, you let him ruin Grindelwald's hard work. I'm so sorry to Grindelwald! Poor Grindelwald really doesn't want to die in peace. Your intentions suck, but you are still such a boring dark character. In the end, he was inspired by the light of righteousness and decided to do good and abandon evil and punish himself, vomiting blood. I don't give it a -2 because it starts well and is exciting.

Later, the author became more and more careless in his writing and was very irresponsible to the readers. I regret buying the entire book.

Perfect start, confusing ending

The author's imagination is very good, but the writing style is not up to par, some details are poorly described, and the ending is also very abrupt, completely inconsistent with the temperament that Harry should have in the previous article. Now that Harry has forgiven Voldemort for the murder of his parents and chosen to be with him, it's really funny that he would change his long-held beliefs because of Lily's diary.

The ending was a bit unexpected, I originally thought it could go on forever

From the interesting ideas at the beginning to the ridiculous ending, this article overall disappointed me. The twists and turns were sudden, the characters collapsed, and I really regretted buying the whole thing. The first part is enough, but the second part is unnecessary.

Don't ask, you'll regret it if you ask

I really don't understand why every stage turns in a strange way. There is obviously a better way to deal with it, but the one that appears is the weirdest one. It suddenly made me jump from children's literature to Qiong Yao drama. All normal characters will be forced to collapse at a certain moment. Some of the plots are also weird... After being fucked by someone and being filled with a love that doesn't know whether it's true or false, can everything be forgiven...? There is also the matter of asking for information during the MJ process... Germany's Gestapo seemed to have done something similar in the early days... But almost no one fell victim to it. Overall, Harry's character gives me a feeling of asymmetry in cognition and ability. Dumbledore's description is almost weird from beginning to end, and Voldemort is also... If the complaint is irrelevant, what makes you think that Voldemort, who is physically incapable of understanding the love of this thing, will love purely... It's a pity that such a good idea and beginning...

The ending is a bit unexpected, but fortunately, it's not that bad. Hmm... Maybe I can ask for a sequel.

I really like the setting, but the twist in the ending is weird and strange, even if it's all black, I can still understand it...