On the Road at Qingming

Not bad! It would be nice if it was a little scarier. It's not enough to watch. Yingxue needs to work harder!

There is the mystery of corpse extermination in Xiangxi, but it is not that scary. Good

How should I put this? A short story that tells you from the beginning that it ends is unsuccessful. The form is too ordinary, and the whole text feels very bland. The essence of the short story is completely missing. It's okay to read as a sketch. I suggest adults put some effort into plot presentation, as substitution is too simple. The atmosphere you want to create is not infectious enough. Above.

It's a good article, I like it. I'll look for an expert to read it, maybe there will be some positive reviews.

The concept is good, but I still guessed the ending, haha

I guessed the ending right from the beginning... Wakakaka, by the way, I really deserve to be a person who spends midnight reading ghost stories... But I have a question, why does the hair look like a woman? Has Nai been poisoned by the TV series? Can you delete the sentence that it turns out there was a woman in the car? Hehe. Come on.

Well, that's right. I started to have suspicions when the Taoist priest took the shoes, and when the driver of the cart talked to the Taoist priest for the first time, and at the same time Xiaoyu was not mentioned at all, I was sure that it was Xiaoyu who was on the cart.

It's a ghost story, and the atmosphere and environment are well-done, although it didn't scare me. To be honest, I don't see many supernatural texts. I am specialized in this area, so I feel a bit helpless. I'm going to take some pictures, but I'm going to collect some. This article is written with the word "cold" throughout the text, which is very distinctive, but the degree of coldness remains the same. The first sentence "piercing the intestines and entering the lungs" is too heavy, and the subsequent coldness is somewhat weak. Or it would be better to handle it in layers. Then there are the Taoist priests. I always feel that the Taoist priest's sentence about looking at his bare feet feels very... Ahem, I won't cj anymore. When I got the shoes later, my first reaction was that they were taken off the corpse, and then I started to feel a little cute about this Taoist priest~~ The result was completely 8 Sujiang Zi... Okay, 8HC, for this short story, the supernatural short story should be as pure as possible, and don't bring such associations to others. You can use some skills to block this association when dealing with details. For example, describe the Taoist priest in two sentences and write it as a violent Taoist priest who kills demons and demons... Then or you can use him as the protagonist to write a series of supernatural short stories, alive~~ Author's reply: Haha, your review is good. 8 Looking at the Taoist priest and Xiaoyu in the back, I originally thought they were a bit 8CJ... Xiaoyu, who is 8 years old, might become a pair with Qingyang if he is a ghost...

Got goosebumps all over my body, cold

Read this article during Qingming Festival~ Uh, It's indeed a bit cold.