A Record of Being Cherished

An ordinary article, the most important elements that constitute a good article are a good plot and a clear mission statement, but it is a pity that the author failed to achieve both. How can I put it? I'm quite disappointed. I read this movie because the design of this movie is very similar to "The Concubine of the Queen" that I have seen before. I thought it should be pretty good... Haha... Let's talk about a few relatively simple characters first, Qu Shi, Song Ziyu and the male protagonist's mother. The characters are difficult to describe in one sentence and the various behaviors are inexplicable and far-fetched. It seems that the plot is deliberately set up to embarrass the female protagonist and has no vitality at all. In fact, I really think Song Ziyu was portrayed in a terrible way. If I think about that era, a man who was willing to disobey the imperial edict for the sake of his beloved cousin, I don't think he would be that bad, at least not because his cousin refused to do it for him. The concubine became the male protagonist's concubine and became crazy (you must know that it is very rare for a person with no background to be able to make up his mind to marry his cousin in the face of difficulties from the powerful and oppression from all sides). Therefore, I can only say that Song Ziyu's darkening is inexplicable. And if Song is not the male protagonist, he will not get love... If it is dark, it will be dark. Since Song is allowed to be a petty official! (I can only say that the author finally created a better character, but it was ruined by his own writing. It also ruined the gentle and jade-like character of the number one scholar in my heart. The image of Mr. Pian) Let's talk about the heroine... She's really pretentious… She's been pretentious for too long. I've read Chapter 46, which is probably more than half of the whole text. The heroine still does it, and all she can think about is… Ah, the hero is a bully. I'm so sad to face him… I have to find a way to escape! You don't have any self-consciousness about being the heroine. You said you are being pretentious, but you still give the hero a little response, but you still avoid it. Anyway, at this point in the article, I can still see any trace of the heroine's liking for the hero. There is really a big problem with this kind of progress! Moreover, the only skill is to cry! There is no one. The charm of the heroine may be that except for the face and body, nothing matches the heroine's configuration... I'm speechless... The male protagonist is not very likable (maybe because I saw a more mature character, Mr. Xie Anping), and I really don't have much interest in the image of this male protagonist. The author's writing skills are adequate, but he still needs real ideas! The characters really need to be fleshed out.

What a pity, some chapters are locked??, But the writing style is really good

I read it all night, and I felt that the ending was a bit rushed, and even though it was a sweet novel, some parts were quite frustrating. I cried at one point because of the heroine. At first, I thought that the heroine should be the main wife, or that she would become the main wife very quickly, but I didn't expect that she was a concubine from beginning to end... She became the main wife in the last chapter... It's really...

Ahhh, I finished reading it again. . It doesn't work if it looks good!

Here's the little bun! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Can you do a side story? !

I finally finished reading it, and for the first time I felt so annoyed while reading a novel. I didn't embarrass myself, I just went through the motions, and after just two glances, I probably turned the page. The author's appearance description and writing style are really good, so I fell into the trap and subscribed all at once. Usually when I do this, it is an old author that I like and trust very much. This book is the first time I read the author's book, and I accidentally fell into the trap. It is my fault. The heroine didn't die tragically, just because she was the heroine and the hero loved the heroine. Other than that, I couldn't find any reason why she could survive in ancient times. Don't say that she would be fine if she didn't meet the male protagonist. Even if she marries Carpenter Li, Carpenter can't protect her. Sooner or later, she will either be robbed and used as a concubine or a concubine. The Carpenter will come to find someone for her and be killed, Gameover; The male protagonist loves the female protagonist. In ancient times, he was not considered a scumbag. He gave the heroine face and protected her. As long as the heroine was alive and well, so-so could get over it. Don't talk about sex failing and falling in love with Chi, women in ancient times have experienced this, and they all have this consciousness. All they can do is to catch the man in front of love and turn it into love, so that they can live a good life. The male protagonist is enough, he is just a feudal man who is a devil in the world, and he has no standards at all. The empress talks about love and is disliked by others. What do you want your other legal concubines to think? The female protagonist is completely like a modern time-traveling woman, and the male protagonist is completely as if he has been lowered. You deserve to have your character destroyed for the sake of love. If the male protagonist doesn't really care about her, if he just wants to sleep with her, the female protagonist can easily deal with it. He can either keep her father and want to give birth to a child, so that he can be taken care of; But in this case, it is simply the miserable treatment of ordinary women in ancient times as concubines. After all, she is also the heroine. If there is a chance, she will design a few male protagonists to save her father, no matter what, just live a good life. I hope that the author can keep his writing style and think more about the characters and plots, and don't blindly act like a naive girl, waiting for love to start from scratch, and he will be able to do it again.

Is there no extra story?

Oops, I'm late. Congratulations on the completion.

Finished spreading flowers, thank you for your hard work! This is the first novel that I have followed from beginning to end. Although it takes quite a long time, I still had a lot of fun following it because the plot is my favorite! I hope you can have the same great works coming out, love you????