
A Few Good Men + The Expendables: I Must Be a Fake Soldier
士兵突击+利刃出鞘 我大概是当了假兵
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- 119k Words
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- Danmei (BL)
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- Modern Era
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- 9y ago
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- JJWXC
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The emotional line is so baffling... I suddenly feel jealous without any foreshadowing...
In fact, there is really no need to compare Lao A and Langya. One is a military drama and the other is an idol drama. Langya has too many pitfalls. I will not mention a certain Fan Wen, but I will say that the substitute literature in Xiaozhuang's original drama "Sleeping with My Girlfriend" has particularly affected my perception of special forces. If it weren't for I can't believe the existence of soldiers. The psychological quality of special forces who have undergone strict training is like this. During the exercise, the soldiers did not even eat the steamed buns that reached their mouths. The special forces hid in the female soldiers' dormitory, and even said that I would give it to you when they were in the dormitory. Is this something that Chinese female soldiers can do? Isn't this really a Sakura girl? Oh, and the two hundred yuan, it's as ridiculous as the five red blood cells captured in South America who needed mercenaries and halos to prevent them from being completely wiped out. And that Staff Officer Xia, really didn't deliberately smear the Chinese female soldiers?
When I saw this, I felt that I was too influenced by Meow Meow, and I would always imitate unconsciously, such as the map drawing section. In fact, I felt that the appearance of Ye Fan was a bit abrupt. I felt that he should be the epitome of Da Da's love for Wu Xuan in his own novel. He has the same ability and the same care. However, if such a character appears in the same novel and is not well grasped, it can easily overwhelm him, especially when the prototype of this person is the protagonist of another article. Moreover, it is not another article and another story from another perspective, but the same story with almost the same perspective and plot, but with a different protagonist. Maybe it's a bit harsh to say these words without reading the back, but that's what I felt just after reading this chapter. DaDa also said before that I opened the trap because I liked that article, so I don't have any ill intentions. I just hope DaDa can come up with a better plot and make this article better. Bow
I have always felt that Yuan Lang is too aggressive in his heart and has a strong desire for control. This is reflected in the fan fiction written by many people. He requires himself to control the psychological changes of his subordinates. This is good in combat troops, but I always feel that it is inappropriate to use it on lovers. It makes me feel uncomfortable to think that my inner changes are controlled by one person without any privacy. (ღ˘⌣˘ღ) It just happened suddenly (≧▽≦)
Suddenly, I felt that the cp with Gong Jian was also great. The emotional scene was a bit too fast.
The emotional line is really abrupt. Yuan Lang doesn't get along with him much, but he suddenly feels emotional. Moreover, the character of the male protagonist is not written out. It feels more like a set character, but he is not brought to life vividly, which is a bit thin.
Mrs. Queshi has been greatly affected by Xue Miao.,,,
Old A had no noncommissioned officers before Chengcai and Xu Sanduo, and their youngest was also a second lieutenant.
Railway: You, you, you, and him, I've been keeping an eye on each one of them. It would be a pity not to dig up such good pumpkin seedlings.
Um? Wasn't the captain roasting the sheep? The Aijia fell in love with the captain because of his majestic appearance while roasting the sheep, hahahahahahahahaha