Oriental grass grows beside the stream, and Nanke ends in a dream
First of all, I would like to express my humility to you. I have not read the entire article because most of the plot scenes are really familiar. Also, Xiaoxue's psychological endurance is limited. Such a sad story is too sour and makes me feel a little uncomfortable.
What is quite innovative is the beginning and the end, which impressed Xiaoxue deeply.
"Yanwei" grows on roadsides and wetlands near water. It likes sunshine, warmth and moisture, and "jianbian" has this meaning.
I only pity the wild grass growing by the stream, and I cry out in sorrow because my life is so short.
The cold winter is about to end the beauty of spring, but Nanke will end his dream.
The beginning of the article hints at the ending of this article in a unique way, with a light and indifferent feeling, which is unique.
The whole text is mostly "plain", and it is told in a clear and light narrative way, as if it were eloquently told. There is a little sadness and a little sadness in the calmness. It seems to be a characteristic, but the climax and conflict parts are also a bit muted. Only when thick ink and heavy colors occasionally appear in the line drawings can it have a visual impact, Xiaoxueqiao thought.
He has a certain skill in character creation, but there are too many dialogues and the psychological description of the characters is somewhat lacking. This is a shortcoming that Xiaoxue thinks. It can be written better with a larger writing style, and it will be more brilliant with a little description.
Let's talk about the structure of this article. It's a bit loose for a novel, with the flavor of essays and prose.
As far as a "time travel article" is concerned, Dada's ending setting is undoubtedly very unique, and Xiaoxue deserves extra points here.
The plot setting is a bit popular, especially the scenes in the palace, which have a certain dramatic feel. Furthermore, maybe it's because Xiaoxue believes in Buddhism and has a different understanding of some Buddhist principles in the article, which is also the reason why there are some jokes.
Xiaoxue gave this article a score of 4.8, Which is quite good.
Oriental grass grows beside the stream, and Nanke ends in a dream First of all, I would like to express my humility to you. I have not read the entire article because most of the plot scenes are really familiar. Also, Xiaoxue's psychological endurance is limited. Such a sad story is too sour and makes me feel a little uncomfortable. What is quite innovative is the beginning and the end, which impressed Xiaoxue deeply. "Yanwei" grows on roadsides and wetlands near water. It likes sunshine, warmth and moisture, and "jianbian" has this meaning. I only pity the wild grass growing by the stream, and I cry out in sorrow because my life is so short. The cold winter is about to end the beauty of spring, but Nanke will end his dream. The beginning of the article hints at the ending of this article in a unique way, with a light and indifferent feeling, which is unique. The whole text is mostly "plain", and it is told in a clear and light narrative way, as if it were eloquently told. There is a little sadness and a little sadness in the calmness. It seems to be a characteristic, but the climax and conflict parts are also a bit muted. Only when thick ink and heavy colors occasionally appear in the line drawings can it have a visual impact, Xiaoxueqiao thought. He has a certain skill in character creation, but there are too many dialogues and the psychological description of the characters is somewhat lacking. This is a shortcoming that Xiaoxue thinks. It can be written better with a larger writing style, and it will be more brilliant with a little description. Let's talk about the structure of this article. It's a bit loose for a novel, with the flavor of essays and prose. As far as a "time travel article" is concerned, Dada's ending setting is undoubtedly very unique, and Xiaoxue deserves extra points here. The plot setting is a bit popular, especially the scenes in the palace, which have a certain dramatic feel. Furthermore, maybe it's because Xiaoxue believes in Buddhism and has a different understanding of some Buddhist principles in the article, which is also the reason why there are some jokes. Xiaoxue gave this article a score of 4.8, Which is quite good.