Restless in Death

Review of "Death is Not Peaceful" Purple rhyme peach blossom I wrote this article years ago, and it took me a long time to submit the review. Mainly because I have been trying to find an entry point for review. I have also been exposed to Danmei Wen, and I generally have an understandable attitude towards this type of article. I once read an article about a man, which left a deep impression on me. The author used delicate pen and ink to write an article. The Danmei article is so beautiful that it makes the readers ignore the gender of the two people, ignore the rejection and disapproval of this kind of relationship in that era and living environment, and think that they should be together, they should belong to each other, and they will never leave each other for life. Since then, I have read several good novels on this theme. Regardless of the plot setting, emotional description, and the display of the inner world of the characters, readers can move from recognition to empathy to identification. The writing of this article is a bit stiff, the scene changes a little quickly, and each scene switch is very sudden. The reader is still in the previous scene, and the next sentence suddenly cuts into another scene. This is often said to be a messy perspective. Too many and too frequent scene changes dazzle the reader. The most important thing is that the author cannot grasp the key points that the author wants to express, and it is very difficult to substitute. For example, at the beginning of the chapter, the male protagonist's triumph, being conferred at court, and the celebration banquet are all festive and grand scenes. What the readers see is the male protagonist returning to the court indifferently, being conferred in a single stroke, and celebrating the victory in a click. Even the big BOSS (Emperor) and the second BOSS (Queen), as well as the prince, prince, and princesses ended these ceremonies without showing up. This is unreasonable. There is no need to write a big book here. Appropriate writing is okay. It is okay not to let readers be immersed in the scene and let everyone truly feel the lively and festive atmosphere, instead of completing all this from the author's explanatory narrative. The characters appear very suddenly, almost every character comes from the air, which makes people confused. The author brings too much subjective will into the article when writing. You know who the characters you set are, so it doesn't matter if they appear directly. You take it for granted that the readers will also know who they are. But dear, there should be necessary foreshadowing. Go straight to the main point. Sometimes the title is too much to bear. We are writing a novel. It needs to have a plot, interesting points, beautiful writing, and vivid character settings for readers to like it. Don't let the hero's mother suddenly appear while the reader is still struggling to remember the prince. Before the mother and son get along, another imperial sister and maid appears, and after a bowl of medicine, another Chu Ruo pops up. I feel very confused. When writing, you can bring yourself into the text, but don't bring too much subjective things into it. You can think about what expectations you, as a reader, would have for someone, something, or a scene, and how you would like it if you wrote it. I wonder if this can avoid some of the above shortcomings? As the author said, the plot unfolds slowly, but dear, are you going in the wrong direction? Regardless of the characters, the soy sauce aisle is almost complete. One of the protagonists, a certain prince, is still squatting in the corner drawing circles. I want to say are you my biological mother? Hehe... Taohua likes to read novels with happy endings and everyone is happy, so BE can't accept it. Personal opinions and represent only one person. Come on, author!

^^Sorry, author-chan, I didn't read them all because I don't like ancient styles very much_(:з∠)_ However, the writing is very smooth, the transitions between scenes and characters' language are also very natural, and the plot is also very rhythmic. However, it may be due to personal preference. I feel that the first two chapters are a little bit draggy, but the rest are very good. Please continue to work hard ^^

From the forum: You still have an air conditioner to talk to me about, but I think of it as an air conditioner...

Review of "Death is Not Peaceful" Purple rhyme peach blossom I wrote this article years ago, and it took me a long time to submit the review. Mainly because I have been trying to find an entry point for review. I have also been exposed to Danmei Wen, and I generally have an understandable attitude towards this type of article. I once read an article about a man, which left a deep impression on me. The author used delicate pen and ink to write an article. The Danmei article is so beautiful that it makes the readers ignore the gender of the two people, ignore the rejection and disapproval of this kind of relationship in that era and living environment, and think that they should be together, they should belong to each other, and they will never leave each other for life. Since then, I have read several good novels on this theme. Regardless of the plot setting, emotional description, and the display of the inner world of the characters, readers can move from recognition to empathy to identification. The writing of this article is a bit stiff, the scene changes a little quickly, and each scene switch is very sudden. The reader is still in the previous scene, and the next sentence suddenly cuts into another scene. This is often said to be a messy perspective. Too many and too frequent scene changes dazzle the reader. The most important thing is that the author cannot grasp the key points that the author wants to express, and it is very difficult to substitute. For example, at the beginning of the chapter, the male protagonist's triumph, being conferred at court, and the celebration banquet are all festive and grand scenes. What the readers see is the male protagonist returning to the court indifferently, being conferred in a single stroke, and celebrating the victory in a click. Even the big BOSS (Emperor) and the second BOSS (Queen), as well as the prince, prince, and princesses ended these ceremonies without showing up. This is unreasonable. There is no need to write a big book here. Appropriate writing is okay. It is okay not to let readers be immersed in the scene and let everyone truly feel the lively and festive atmosphere, instead of completing all this from the author's explanatory narrative. The characters appear very suddenly, almost every character comes from the air, which makes people confused. The author brings too much subjective will into the article when writing. You know who the characters you set are, so it doesn't matter if they appear directly. You take it for granted that the readers will also know who they are. But dear, there should be necessary foreshadowing. Go straight to the main point. Sometimes the title is too much to bear. We are writing a novel. It needs to have a plot, interesting points, beautiful writing, and vivid character settings for readers to like it. Don't let the hero's mother suddenly appear while the reader is still struggling to remember the prince. Before the mother and son get along, another imperial sister and maid appears, and after a bowl of medicine, another Chu Ruo pops up. I feel very confused. When writing, you can bring yourself into the text, but don't bring too much subjective things into it. You can think about what expectations you, as a reader, would have for someone, something, or a scene, and how you would like it if you wrote it. I wonder if this can avoid some of the above shortcomings? As the author said, the plot unfolds slowly, but dear, are you going in the wrong direction? Regardless of the characters, the soy sauce aisle is almost complete. One of the protagonists, a certain prince, is still squatting in the corner drawing circles. I want to say are you my biological mother? Hehe... Taohua likes to read novels with happy endings and everyone is happy, so BE can't accept it. Personal opinions and represent only one person. Come on, author!

Internet writing is a fast-food culture, and the title and copy must highlight the theme and highlights. Of course, if you have become a god, you don't need to worry about the title. But even if it was Feitian Yexiang and P Da, in the early days when it was not very popular, the titles it obtained were bright, making readers want to click on it. Why are Daji and I competing for men? The death is unsolved, and it is a bit literary, not as good as this era of troubled times, the royal family, and the like. Either highlight the characters, or highlight the emotions and plot. Death is not at peace, it seems to be an abstract vision

I love this writing!!!! The copy should be revised carefully, whether it is to highlight the plot or the characters. The current copy has no information at all.

Yes, the writing is very good, and the first chapter also leaves a suspense, making people want to read on. But, wow, your writing, I really don't know what you are talking about.

I'm here to read your article, come on!