I'm the Youngest in the World

^V^ The author is great. I'm super waiting to see. Hug me. Hurry up and hook up with all the new ones. Hehe.

The author is great, great [pen refill]

222.222 Is an amazing number.

Suddenly I realized that I spent all my time chasing this article and didn't comment on anything else.

I'm so hungry. Are you responsible?

You are not a good steamed stuffed bun, you are a steamed stuffed bun stuffed with pickled vegetables, you are a bad steamed stuffed bun that always keeps updating.

Hahaha, these grandpas

Although it is still pitiful, I finally enjoyed reading it. In fact, I am not sure why this article is so cold, but it seems to be okay! The writing in the first few chapters was not very good, but the more I wrote it, the better it became. At least everything was explained. The writing style was also very non-technical, and the plot was good. Even the protagonist's emotions had to go with the flow. You still need to keep working hard! It's not enough to stop them all the time. I like Wa An and Kuan very much, and I hope to see more stories about them. Face covering, I like plot and daily life. Keep up the good work, big brother!

How to say it. After reading so much (actually not that much), I feel that each character's personality is not very distinct (personal opinion). I don't know if it is because of the author's experience or something, but some of the ideas you want to express in your content are not well expressed. Judging from the content in the chapter, although you wrote it, it did not make a deep impression on people. It is basically the kind of thing that is forgotten after reading it. I think you can work hard in this aspect. Also, although the plot has started since chapter eight, there is nothing new, and I don't know why, but I died after reading chapter eight. Try to think of something new and novel! For example, the golden finger on Wa'an's body does not need to be fully expressed first when expressing Wa'an's origin. You can keep it a little mysterious. For example, Wa'an's influence on A Kuan, why A Kuan accepted Wa An so easily, and what thoughts he had in his heart when he first met Wa An. You have to think more about how to express him. I always felt that I had no impression after watching it. Also, since Wa An is the protagonist of this article, it feels like it has been talking about some things about A Kuan. Of course, this does not rule out the fact that I only read the first few chapters and the last chapter. The above are all my personal opinions, I hope you don't mind. You still have many advantages, such as your writing style is not a noob (actually I don't need to say this).

Is the password above the author's own? (A smirking expression)