I think it's progressing too fast
I think that when the heroine is crawled into bed by her father and escapes, some introduction to the background and psychological description of the heroine can be appropriately interspersed, otherwise it will appear that the heroine's psychological quality is too strong. After all, girls in their twenties will inevitably have shadows after experiencing that kind of thing, not to mention that the heroine is just a child_(:з∠)_
Also, the heroine is a child, and she doesn't kill people often. How come she doesn't feel any emotions after killing someone_(:з∠)_
I feel like the other ones are pretty good. Keep up the good work, the author_(:з∠)_
I think it's progressing too fast I think that when the heroine is crawled into bed by her father and escapes, some introduction to the background and psychological description of the heroine can be appropriately interspersed, otherwise it will appear that the heroine's psychological quality is too strong. After all, girls in their twenties will inevitably have shadows after experiencing that kind of thing, not to mention that the heroine is just a child_(:з∠)_ Also, the heroine is a child, and she doesn't kill people often. How come she doesn't feel any emotions after killing someone_(:з∠)_ I feel like the other ones are pretty good. Keep up the good work, the author_(:з∠)_