
(HP) The Joke
(HP)The Joke
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To be honest, the body language of this moving hand is particularly good. The interesting thing is that it cares. Suddenly I thought of Liz and Darcy in Jane's Pride and Prejudice. The corresponding ones here are Xiao De. Not only does this young master appear externally, but sometimes the emotions that are about to come out in his heart are also similar.
Cedric Diggory, a male god who is more in line with the British college style XXD
The author wrote the Goblet of Fire more leisurely than at the beginning, with concise and clear ideas. I think it is better to write the last two chapters in a way that attracts readers' attention and reflects what I think Dehe really looks like.
Wow, you update so quickly! When I read the first few chapters, I thought your progress would be too slow, and then suddenly the progress was accelerated. When I read it, I felt that the emotional transition between Hermione and Malfoy was a bit sudden. According to the characters in the original book, Malfoy should be quite suspicious, Hermione's character should be more tough, and the emotional transition between Hermione and him should not be that fast... But if we follow our yy, with this setting, I think it will be more natural if there is more conflict and communication. Um. I suddenly want to see the plot line you develop! ! And your various character descriptions, environment, voice, etc., I think are all very consistent with the world of Harry Potter, without any violation! ! ! Super impressed! ! Keep up the good work! Daqiqi! !