[Hibari X Mukuro] A Dance for Two at Court

When will lz update the article next time...

OK... Applause... ... Try to continue writing!

Ahhhhhhh We are 1869's destiny!!!

BLBL…[Corners of mouth twitching]

Ps, please come on, Lingling!!! Author's reply: Thank you... (With tears in my eyes)

I feel that Ling Ling has great potential. If I abbreviate the first and second chapters to make the story more "easier to read", it would be a very good novel~ Author's reply: Thank you~

This chapter is so well written~ It feels like it's getting better~

Suddenly I thought, why not serialize it on BAIDU or something like that? JJ is relatively unpopular... The dialogue in the middle is very good. The plot of this chapter progresses a little faster, but the main line still feels not very clear (maybe it's because I'm not familiar with these people...) Author's reply: ... Ah, the main plot kind of thing...

This chapter is well written~ "Oh, it turns out it's true~" This kind of sentence seems to have a very subtle sense of laughter. I wish the sentences could be a little shorter. The content in parentheses is sometimes interesting, but if used too much, it feels a bit too much...

It's a funny joke... I always feel like I can see the author in some places~ The description seems a little too much...