Two dark elves who worship the God of Darkness seek help from the opposing Temple of Light to return to their homeland.
A dark elf with a mysterious identity, an anxious silver knight and a temple knight, a scheming attendant, and a guardian knight who has “gotten it wrong”...
The escorts and their charges are wary of one another, and the road ahead is full of ambushes and danger.
Magic and conspiracy, suspicion and trust, love and friendship, life and faith...
A bumpy ride in a red carriage sets the stage for an extraordinary adventure.
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The article is very good, but there is one problem. It is too "crowded". You have included too much content in a short chapter, so it seems dazzling. In fact, if you lengthen this article to 1 million words, it is absolutely enough. The current length is too short, and there are too many characters and too many stories, which makes it a bit uncomfortable. Judging from this length, at least 2/3 of the characters must be deleted, and two branches of the story must be cut off to make it fresh.
Sorry, I'm being blunt, but that's exactly what it feels like
The overall feeling is good, to say the least
The blue bird floats and sinks in the mountains and rivers, but my heart becomes more and more blurred
The golden sunshine is gorgeous, how decadent it is to fall in love with you
I always have trouble remembering foreign names~!~
Sprinkle flowers`
Super nice. I like it. But somewhat like janpanese cartoon style . Especially … YIN HE YING XIONG ZHUAN
Send blessings to Yulik's love~ Haha
The article is very good, but there is one problem. It is too "crowded". You have included too much content in a short chapter, so it seems dazzling. In fact, if you lengthen this article to 1 million words, it is absolutely enough. The current length is too short, and there are too many characters and too many stories, which makes it a bit uncomfortable. Judging from this length, at least 2/3 of the characters must be deleted, and two branches of the story must be cut off to make it fresh. Sorry, I'm being blunt, but that's exactly what it feels like
The overall feeling is good, to say the least
The blue bird floats and sinks in the mountains and rivers, but my heart becomes more and more blurred The golden sunshine is gorgeous, how decadent it is to fall in love with you
I always have trouble remembering foreign names~!~
Sprinkle flowers`
Super nice. I like it. But somewhat like janpanese cartoon style . Especially … YIN HE YING XIONG ZHUAN
Not bad. Good story. :)
Excellent, extra points for you^^