Reborn as Rong Jin

I wanted to read it, but when I read the comments, this article also contained bl. It was so intoxicating that I was distracted.

Well, let me comment. Although I am just a scumbag... But based on my meager experience of reading articles and coding some messy things for many years... I think first of all, the author, your cheating is so good that I envy those of you who can finish it... There is never a problem with the writing style and the big plot structure, but there are some details, such as how the male protagonist and the female protagonist get together and how they separate, and how the female protagonist does. Knowing that He Dao San is the male protagonist, why did the old Mr. Li from Fei Shen give such an important thing to a girl he has only been with for more than a hundred days, etc. Many things are not explained clearly, but you know it yourself, the author. The readers are confused when they look at it. It feels like this article is covered by fog, and they can't see clearly. Because the whole article is like this, so I won't give examples one by one. Then there are the branch characters. The endings of Jing Ran, Rong Li and Li Yutong are a mystery and are not mentioned at all at the end. In fact, this ending is a bit hasty. We could add a chapter or a few hundred words to explain it and give it a more emotional ending. Also, the logic is not particularly rigorous, and I feel that it is not well conceived and somewhat inconsistent. As a liberal arts student, I can't tell you the specifics... Well, that's about it. I hope it will be helpful to the author, let's work together! ! !

It means that the heroine's career path can be made clearer. I don't know how to play games, so I can't understand it (^ω^)

We meet, spread flowers spread flowers spread flowers spread flowers spread flowers

Wow, there is a lot of gay love in it. I hope my brother can find his own happiness.

Spread flowers, sprinkle flowers, sprinkle flowers, sprinkle flowers, uncle and Sean can spend more time.

Spread the flowers, spread the flowers, look forward to college life

I like a heroine who works hard like this. Come on, okay?

Spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers

You are really inhumane, you rich man