The handling of the plot related to Luo is indeed too strange... It can only be regarded as the author's failure to express it. It feels not very suitable and does not play a good role as a supporting role. I won't talk about the protagonist. Can I understand the plots of Luo, sister, and sister??? In fact, I have adapted well to the protagonist's strange plot and continued watching it. I don't know that the protagonist's sister, I (silently give myself an injection)
Seeing that his family is actually still alive, he is not happy about it. Instead, he hates him for not dying in the first place.
Isn't this the way normal people should think?
Read it in one sitting! The writing is very serious. (/?\) It expresses Ace's gentle character. (/?\) Oh my, I like this man more and more. It's really not easy to write an article~ Come on!
(￣▽￣) Author, are these two articles together? I read the comments and many little fairies said that the writing is very good. I want to start chasing the article.
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I suddenly found a new article and read it in one go! Ace's novels 1 and 2 are both out!
The author seems to say this is the first article? The writing is great, the writing style is very stable, I hope to see the next article!
Generally speaking, I personally feel that there is some imbalance in the later stage. In fact, it cannot be said to be a problem. It is just that I personally feel that fan fiction is more of a self-extension based on the world view of the original work. This is a point that distinguishes it from the original work. The relationship between the later stage and the pirates themselves is relatively weak, so it feels a little out of touch. However, writing original content is also a direction, and it cannot be said to be wrong.
Anyway, thank you to the author for this article! Hope to see more creations!
Superb writing! Write your own colors from One Piece! The war on top was so well written! The heroine's life experience is also grand and powerful! The emotional description is also very sufficient, and the simple love between the two is really great!
The only fly in the ointment is that Ace's character is not obvious in the later stages, but this is understandable, after all, it is telling the story of the heroine. It's a pity that the Whitebeard Pirates no longer have a role in the later stage. Not only Dad and Marco, but everyone in the Pirates has a shining point.
Brother Ming and Luo are also embarrassed. The focus is almost all on the original characters, so it is difficult to be so touched. Luo also made me feel aggrieved. He didn't know they were still alive. He also lived a very hard life and was close to death many times. If Luo was not a character I like very much, and if I had not watched One Piece so seriously, I would definitely condemn Luo based on the author's description. The author's writing is great, but forgive me, I almost skipped over the psychological analysis of my fiancée and sister. If you really can't see it, you can't help but refute Luo in your heart.
I am looking forward to the author writing an article about Marco and Ella. I quite like this female character. There are too few articles by Brother Ma, I hope there will be more!
. . . The heroine's thoughts once made me think about abandoning the novel. It's too extreme, and even though Ace is the main character, he doesn't take the people Ace cares about into consideration. What I hate the most is when she drives a wedge between Ace and Luffy. At this time, Ace felt that the writing was right. Such words cannot be said!!! That part pissed me off!!! The heroine is jealous of other people's happiness like a child, but does not see other people's pain. (Part of the reason is that I like Luffy. This behavior is so troubling that I can't stand it!)
Hope you will continue to work hard! Write better articles! Happy New Year!!!
What's going on? I feel like crying for no reason.
I also want him to never leave. He is only 20 years old. He has been 20 years old since I was 16. Now that I am 22, he is still 20. Time has stopped with him for a long time.
The handling of the plot related to Luo is indeed too strange... It can only be regarded as the author's failure to express it. It feels not very suitable and does not play a good role as a supporting role. I won't talk about the protagonist. Can I understand the plots of Luo, sister, and sister??? In fact, I have adapted well to the protagonist's strange plot and continued watching it. I don't know that the protagonist's sister, I (silently give myself an injection)
Seeing that his family is actually still alive, he is not happy about it. Instead, he hates him for not dying in the first place. Isn't this the way normal people should think?
Read it in one sitting! The writing is very serious. (/?\) It expresses Ace's gentle character. (/?\) Oh my, I like this man more and more. It's really not easy to write an article~ Come on!
(￣▽￣) Author, are these two articles together? I read the comments and many little fairies said that the writing is very good. I want to start chasing the article.
!!!!!!!!!!!////////////////Qwqqqqqqqqq!!!!!X
I suddenly found a new article and read it in one go! Ace's novels 1 and 2 are both out! The author seems to say this is the first article? The writing is great, the writing style is very stable, I hope to see the next article! Generally speaking, I personally feel that there is some imbalance in the later stage. In fact, it cannot be said to be a problem. It is just that I personally feel that fan fiction is more of a self-extension based on the world view of the original work. This is a point that distinguishes it from the original work. The relationship between the later stage and the pirates themselves is relatively weak, so it feels a little out of touch. However, writing original content is also a direction, and it cannot be said to be wrong. Anyway, thank you to the author for this article! Hope to see more creations!
Superb writing! Write your own colors from One Piece! The war on top was so well written! The heroine's life experience is also grand and powerful! The emotional description is also very sufficient, and the simple love between the two is really great! The only fly in the ointment is that Ace's character is not obvious in the later stages, but this is understandable, after all, it is telling the story of the heroine. It's a pity that the Whitebeard Pirates no longer have a role in the later stage. Not only Dad and Marco, but everyone in the Pirates has a shining point. Brother Ming and Luo are also embarrassed. The focus is almost all on the original characters, so it is difficult to be so touched. Luo also made me feel aggrieved. He didn't know they were still alive. He also lived a very hard life and was close to death many times. If Luo was not a character I like very much, and if I had not watched One Piece so seriously, I would definitely condemn Luo based on the author's description. The author's writing is great, but forgive me, I almost skipped over the psychological analysis of my fiancée and sister. If you really can't see it, you can't help but refute Luo in your heart. I am looking forward to the author writing an article about Marco and Ella. I quite like this female character. There are too few articles by Brother Ma, I hope there will be more! . . . The heroine's thoughts once made me think about abandoning the novel. It's too extreme, and even though Ace is the main character, he doesn't take the people Ace cares about into consideration. What I hate the most is when she drives a wedge between Ace and Luffy. At this time, Ace felt that the writing was right. Such words cannot be said!!! That part pissed me off!!! The heroine is jealous of other people's happiness like a child, but does not see other people's pain. (Part of the reason is that I like Luffy. This behavior is so troubling that I can't stand it!) Hope you will continue to work hard! Write better articles! Happy New Year!!!
What's going on? I feel like crying for no reason.
I also want him to never leave. He is only 20 years old. He has been 20 years old since I was 16. Now that I am 22, he is still 20. Time has stopped with him for a long time.
What is the official title of Lieutenant Colonel?