
[Jose Mourinho] I Was Born When You Were Already Old
[穆里尼奥]我生君已老
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 23k Words
- Genre
- Romance
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 9y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
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Hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh made me laugh. I, a Magic fan, can't believe that Uncle Psy is so warm. Red and fiery, in a trance
This bloodline is also awesome...
Mr. Shui has the prettiest beard I have ever seen. Suddenly he looks more like a Predator. He used to look like a handsome boy...
... Which person is this article in?
Hahaha, the talkative Mourinho is the most charming. Mourinho's psychology is probably that he just likes to see how you can't stand me and can't fuck me╮(╯▽╰)╭
Do you mind if I pick on you? The idea of the article is very good, but the writing style is average (but newcomers are like this). The most important thing is that the organization of the article is not very clear. You can make an outline, add bricks and tiles to it, and then revise it. This will be much better. There are also issues with punctuation and sentence fragmentation. If you revise more, it will get better and better. Come on (???_??)?
Alas╯╰, it's another trap d(?д??)
First person is so annoying and has no punctuation
Looks like it was a trap. If I had known it, I wouldn't have pursued it. I feel so heartbroken.
The author's great reasons left me speechless╮ (_)╭