After I Became a Mystic

Wouldn't the hospital provide a direct caesarean section + first aid for difficult labor? How could you ask about protecting the elder and the younger?

Didn't Su Rong know whether she was pregnant just by looking at her face? Doesn't senior brother know junior sister's physical condition by checking her pulse? The pregnancy chapter is a funny article, right... The senior brother was still struggling for several days, and Su Rong was still worrying about what was wrong with her. The two of them went to the hospital to find out they were pregnant. It felt like the two of them had been time-traveled...

Read it in one day. It's very satisfying to get the heroine slapped in the face in various short stories about Feng Shui. But there are a few places that are really embarrassing. Let's talk about changing the male protagonist. From the beginning, it was obvious that Hong Luan was the male protagonist of Song Huai, and the senior brother was obviously the affectionate male supporting role, right? Changed suddenly? ? With a confused look on his face, the setting of Hong Luan about Song Huai was quite good. The feeling of getting along with Song Huai at the beginning was a bit special. Not surprisingly, starting the love mode from a misunderstanding? It's just some details. The setting of Su Xun's character is a bit contradictory. To put it bluntly, he didn't achieve anything. It can also be said that the heroine's father was too powerful and was killed in the early stage. But that doesn't mean he was deceived about his daughter in the first place, right? The heroine's father's friend is also very awesome, but it's a bit far-fetched that he missed it just like that. Su Xun's character was not ruthless enough, but he was able to join forces with others to deal with his adoptive father. Then it would be strange if he just wanted to hide the news from the beginning and didn't check or take action himself. In addition, there are small details. As for Chen Wenge at the end, does the heroine have a good impression of him? When he came to the door, he asked fans to remind him that he would slap the heroine in the face! The heroine helped him with Feng Shui, which was already very good, but later she actually brought someone to come to him for help? Even if I wanted to write both sides of the story, I wouldn't show up like this. Finally, when talking about the people in the dormitory at the beginning, since the girl knew who Shen Yi was as soon as she heard his name, she wouldn't have no idea what he looked like at the beginning, right? The heroine's background is so powerful, doesn't everyone in the family keep telling her about her for fear that the younger generation will be offended? You must understand the master's school clearly. How can we be less conceited if the schools have the same names? Besides, the children in these families are not so stupid, and they get angry when they come up. Alas, in fact, these are nothing. If you add more characters and characters to these people, it can be rounded off. The most important thing is, hey, why did you change the male lead?! ! ! At first I thought it was senior brother, but when I saw the author's reply in the comment area, he meant Song Huai. I finally accepted Song Huai and thought it was good, so why did I change it back? ? ? Crazy, the mood is too complicated. . .

All I can say is that these comments are enough.

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, I read it all in one go! I just want to ask, are all the feng shui in the article true? I was stunned for a moment!

I just want to ask if the author has a group account?

After watching it in one sitting, apart from the low presence of the male protagonist in the early stage, the plot is still

(*/?\*) I haven't watched it for a few days and it's finally over.

666 Likes the little story in it

In fact... In actual production, there is no multiple-choice question about protecting the elderly and the children.