Tales from the Kingdom of Women (Female-Dominated)

1. "The three saviors who appeared one after another during the country's turmoil and "carried the tide" to overcome the crisis all came from this house."... "Race the storm" 2. "The whole Ban family is proud of this lineage"... The whole Ban family is "proud" of this lineage 3. "The eldest daughter was sent to the battlefield in accordance with the rules and was injured on the battlefield and was sent home "only dying",..." This sentence should be changed to "The eldest daughter was sent to the battlefield in accordance with the rules" but was "injured on the battlefield", "was sent home "with only one breath left"..." Or "The eldest daughter was sent to the battlefield in accordance with the rules", "injured on the battlefield", "was sent home 'dying',..." 4. "With the absence of the biggest head of the family, the responsibility of being the head of the family falls on the shoulders of the husband of the head of the family." Add a comma and change a period. 5. "Many years later," a remote mountain town welcomed a tribesman with the surname Ban who served as a general in the imperial court, "bringing a wave of joy to the remote town of Wangyu." Add a comma, delete the word "from". Uh, I found that if I go on, I will change the whole article, so I'll stop here and give you a little reminder. 1. Long sentences in the article should be carefully broken up to increase the sense of rhythm; if the sentence is too long, it will appear dull and lead to different understandings (different paragraphs have different meanings). 2. Don't waste money if punctuation is free, but please also be careful about the nature of punctuation. 3. The white words please check and apply again. The Ming and Qing novel-like narrative style is very distinctive. I will collect it first. But when writing, you should pay attention to whether the sentences are too complicated. It will be better if you refine the words and refine them. Author's reply: Thank you for your seriousness!

I feel like I have no feeling when I look at it

I saw a person who looked like a bookkeeper and whispered something to him Isn't the accountant a woman? Very good and beautiful

It's a bit of a running account. The author's reply: Hmm... Often you can't see it when writing... It would be better if there were more reminders...

OK, come on!! Author's reply: Yes!

The writing is too clumsy and I can't read it anymore. The setting is good, please change it. Author's reply: Thank you for the reminder and please give me some pointers. This is an article written due to laziness and lack of determination. So I also know that there are disadvantages, but I always don't know where to start. . Your message is like an inspiration, thank you very much! ~

Equality between men and women, well, is an eternal topic I have always hated the idea that men are superior to women, but I have no choice but to try not to pay attention to it in order to reduce my hatred. Cover your ears and steal the bell, haha