Watching the Abyss with Hands Folded

It's 2025 and I'm still waiting for the end of the world 😭

Fox Fox, 23 years

I was single when I first started reading this book. Now my child is three years old and I haven't finished it yet hahahaha

Help, I read it again, ah ah, I really want to read this oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

I don't know whether I should update it first, Sishou Linyuan, or the strongest HE. It's really a good question.

It's actually not over yet. It's been many years since I graduated.

The senior brother next door is getting a wife!! Our senior brother Bai walks through QAQ in a restored way

Fox, are you willing to do more? It's really okay if you don't want to, but can you tell us? At least if you know it, you can stop looking forward to it. ... As I write this, I suddenly feel like I have been betrayed, even though I am very serious...

Big... Update...

Taking the time to sort out the plot of chapters one to thirty-five, please allow me to briefly summarize the three important clues of this article using the analysis method I am more accustomed to: The main plot line of this article is the grudge between Jingyun Sect and the Demon Sect. The main emotional lines should be between Qingyun and Bai Junting. Based on this, the character's growth line should be Qingyun's transformation from a melon-eater to a virtuous wife, and Bai Junting's transformation from a forbearing elder brother to a great hero who eradicates the demon sect. (If Fox has other default CP, please update to clarify) I like Fox's writing style very much, but without me having to say more, Fox can also tell that the pace of this article is very slow, not only the updates are slow, but also the plot advancement is slow. Everyone understands the reasons for slowness differently. My humble opinion is intended to attract others and encourage updates by the way. First, there are too many descriptive narrations and memories, which disrupts the forward rhythm of the plot. Qingjun's character is close to the narrator. After the little leader clamored to kick the club in the wedge, it was already the seventh chapter when it was online again. In addition, the update cycle is long, and my memory is bad. I have to turn to the front to remember who the little leader is and what he is here for. Second, the supporting characters are all excellent, and the protagonist is a bit bleak in comparison. For example, as soon as Cen Ge appeared, I forgot about Bai Junting, and started to guess who Cen Ge's CP was; as soon as the little leader appeared, how did the good baby grow up, and it felt like there was an expert to protect him from the wind and rain; whether the beauty Feng Qiyao knew martial arts, was it really good to waste youth at home every day? I'm sorry, I blame them for being too good. Qingjun - the bride who was coerced - the bride whose leg was injured - the bride who was poisoned and faked her death. She ate a lot of melons and committed a lot of bad crimes. When she met Bai Junting, in addition to being used, there were memories, watching Bai Junting fall asleep again... There was too little interaction. On the contrary, when I am with Tan Lang, I feel like a sister doting on her younger brother. Bai Junting and Cen Ge, Bai Junting and Yin Ye are not like CP, but they have interaction. This interaction refers to knowing the basics and having a tacit understanding. Of course, the most dramatic CPs are Xiang Lan and Xiao Yao. One is a big fan of the senior brother, and the other is a black eye of the senior brother. Their attributes complement each other. Yes, they are all cute, so where does the protagonist fit in? Third, the villain did not exert his due power. Promoting the rhythm of the story and triggering tension, the villain plays an important role. But at present, all the villain's methods seem to be scratching the surface, their methods are not ruthless enough, and their actions are not fast enough. Hall Master Song has not completely betrayed the enemy, and the fox has also let two new characters appear... There is no problem for the new characters to appear, but if they appear at a non-critical moment, if they appear too early, it will feel like everyone is getting together to drink tea and chat, and there will be no sense of crisis to advance the plot. Although Qingyun was injured, poisoned and even faked his death, Bai Junting also caught a cold due to his efforts, but... Jingyunmen currently does not know what Bai Junting did. Bai Junting concealed it again and again, and Mr. Lu used public relations to save people. This world seems to be very harmonious. The villain did not scare the protagonist and did not let this world be subverted. Therefore, everything Bai Junting did seemed to be gentle and gentle, without any sense of tension. I seriously suspect that Fox did not write a detailed outline. In addition, he did not have enough writing time, so most of the articles were temporarily updated and the rhythm was not well controlled. The above analysis is not to add trouble to Fox, but to briefly summarize the thoughts that I have currently considered. Although I have written a brief introduction to the chapter content, it is too long, so I only intercepted the final analysis part for Fox's reference only. If there is anything wrong, please don't mind. If you need the full version, I can send it to Fox's email. Come on Fox, waiting for your update?(?^O^?)?