The Superstar Path of an Honored Elder

(?ω?)Hiahiahia

Damn it, these pictures are so frustrating to watch.

I can't quite accept the plot of the whole book. It's like a world between two people, and it's not sweet. It makes people wait for so many years without feeling guilty at all. I don't really like this style, but I still let it go.

After reading the whole book, although there are some minor flaws, it is finished. Just read the novel to have fun. Don't worry about it~?

This is also drunk. . . What the hell is written later?

Anyway, I'm deeply disgusted by the fact that Yuwen attacked him in the last part. It's so poisonous that I can't help but wonder why there has to be such a plot. It's so hard to watch.

It's better to write no cp! The emotional line is so broken

Did you think it would continue?

Emotional drama is not just written at the end, it is throughout the whole text, step by step. The author did not relax at all in the previous part, and has been indifferent and ruthless, without even a hint or foreshadowing. At the end, he wants to he, which is really unreasonable. Emotional changes should be added at the beginning. This will not make people feel that the character is ruined, nor will it affect the plot. . . . At most, the author is awkward. I believe readers can completely accept the protagonist's slightest move. For example, in the chapter where he lost the darts, I thought it was a hint that the protagonist had some feelings for Feng Wuya. . It'll be good if you follow this routine, right?

After reading it, the first part is actually quite good, but the development at the end is really... Alas, the ending was unexpected, I thought there would be at least one chapter about master-disciple development.