Serious blurb: A great battle in the martial world separates two childhood sweethearts, driving them both into seclusion. Eight years later, they reappear, but now their blades are turned against each other, and all warmth is gone. When they meet again later and join forces, her view of him gradually begins to waver. Can he melt her frozen heart? Can she put aside her doubts and trust him once more? After eight long years on the road of the martial world, who was right and who was wrong? What was true and what was false?
Lighthearted blurb: Eight years ago, she accidentally fell off a cliff, and by such a remarkable coincidence, her biological father rescued her. Later, her eyes were clouded by a scheme, and the little girl became a cold-blooded assassin, killing again and again.
The author's writing is good, but the title of the article makes it difficult to attract people to read. The copywriting is mediocre and lacks cuteness. The first three chapters lack conflicts to retain readers. It is also recommended to manually leave blank lines between paragraphs and pay attention to the layout. The accumulation of large tracts of text does not look refreshing.
One problem is that the description of the environment is very good, and the wording and sentences are very good. But if you are reading a novel on your mobile phone, you will be a little impatient when you see that a paragraph has a lot of words and occupies one screen of your mobile phone. This question is just a personal suggestion! For reference only!
Dear, the author is great and the writing is very good. There are typos. "Hate and Hate"! Love your writing!
The scene is well described, keep it up!
The description is really well written. I feel that my literary quality is very high. Come on.
Not bad, not bad. It's worth watching. I'll read it patiently, haha.
The content is good and the sections are clearly divided. Come on
Come on, author, I look forward to good articles.