Over a hundred years ago, the Xiumeng Clan unexpectedly gained a kind of magic. But to strengthen their magic, they needed energy. So the Xiumeng Clan set its sights on the Naique Clan, with whom they had always cooperated and lived in peace. The continent of Es is about to face a bloody reckoning.
It's not a good thing to torture the protagonist until he's dying from the beginning. . . But your writing is indeed good and there is room for development. I've collected it, come on.
I feel even more panicked when writing romance, because I can only write without plot. Also, when you write, at least the names of the x family and y family should be nice to hear, or it would be better if they use something that is more well-known.
It's not a good thing to torture the protagonist until he's dying from the beginning. . . But your writing is indeed good and there is room for development. I've collected it, come on.
I feel even more panicked when writing romance, because I can only write without plot. Also, when you write, at least the names of the x family and y family should be nice to hear, or it would be better if they use something that is more well-known.