Reborn to Cultivate Immortality with a Portable Space
重生之带着随身空间去修仙
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When I took a quick look at this copy, I thought I was reading a pirated copy.
Does the copy also include links? I almost thought I was reading a web version of a novel website
The heroine's mother, I don't know what to say. The first one said that she was afraid that her daughter would be a fool and dare not return to her parents' house. It would be useless to stay in her husband's house. The man later married another woman and even the housekeeper bullied her. Those children at home bully your daughter. They clearly know that they are injured. It doesn't make sense to stay here without going back to her parents' house.
The inexplicable hostess is so logical that she doesn't want to go back to her home. I believe that reason, but can't you stay away from the housekeeper? Why on earth did God allow Xiao Zhuangzi to live close to the housekeeper? ! ! Wouldn't it be better to sell it and find another town than here? This is such a stupid idiot's brain
I actually found an antique article! 16 Years old!
It's so strange, why didn't her mother take her away from the housekeeper? Don't everyone know that the housekeeper is not good? It's not like there is no one in her parents' family? The fact that her parents are willing to help Bo Bing means that they are willing to accept Bo Bing and his son! Besides, the heroine's mother is the only one who can inherit the jade pendant. Even if the mother's family doesn't help her mother, she can still live alone with her daughter? And the heroine is like this because she was poisoned in the fetus, shouldn't she leave to avoid getting hurt again? Look at the heroine's mother's life is not good! This is not in line with common sense (⊙o⊙)
What kind of copywriting is this? Can't read
Is there only a third perspective and no protagonist perspective?
The writing is too fluid, and the literary charm is not reflected at all. It is just a flow of facts, incoherent, and there is no plot at all.
There is too much nonsense and the language could be more refined. Don't use the words "" in conjunction with each other, and the characters' language must be carefully considered. Be as concise as possible