The Rebellious Disciple Always Wants to Start a Revolt

I thought I would see the place where I met the two empresses.

Why does it have to end so quickly? It's not sweet yet

Bai Xiang tells the truth in one word

I forgot to comment for a long time... I collected it before I opened it, but I have to say I was still a little disappointed when it was finished. I understand that I want to write about certain points on a whim. When I was in the second grade of junior high school, I loved doing this when writing essays. The whole text was just to write a certain sentence that I thought was particularly handsome, which could last more than a thousand words. But I always feel that this article is more than that. It could be written better... Deeper. Several chapters are really shallow, and the characters are also shallow, which deviates a bit from expectations (I always thought that such characters can be written very provocatively)... I don't know how to describe it. In short, I feel it is a pity. I don't think it is the author's writing skills or anything else. There is a feeling that the story is very empty... Well, I can't say anything.

? ? ? ! ! ! Finished?

Didn't it mean that this abyss was created by the two of them? I thought Zhao couldn't ask for help from Meng.

I know that there is no cold or heat in your immortal bones, and it is still the same as dusk when we meet again after thousands of years. Dear author, see you soon.

The ending was a little rushed. I still remember asking Yuan Xi to have the Hidden Blade.

I listened to the interpretations of these two poems tonight, including the mutual ridicule version, the gay version, the triangle version, and the Suzhou version. I would like to sincerely ask the author, how do you understand Zhijun Xiangu without cold and heat? Please save me from the last and deepest pit of no cold and heat = no knowledge of cold and warmth = ruthlessness, and let me embark on the serious road! Please! !

That Su Shi song is that one. I read what the two of them wrote several times, and it was so imaginative that it needed saving. My thinking: What his brother wrote was, "Oh, let me go. You are crying like this when you want to leave. Brother, you are tired of it. You see, you are making people cry till they turn purple and their intestines are broken. I will not dare to come to this lake again. Come and cry every time. I am sorry!" Sang Xin! Brother Su was a little unhappy. He said you were heartless, so I picked on a girl just to make her cry. People just cry in response to the situation, and then you will burst into laughter, you will burst into laughter! Forget it, let's leave tomorrow anyway. I won't see either the crying female supporter or you, the old bird like you. Such an idea begging for rescue! ! !