The Stand-In Actress [Showbiz]

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Very interesting, spread flowers

The writing is smooth and the plot development is interesting. Come on

I forgot to mention it. I suggest changing Wenwen's name to Sujiangzi.

Already commented, if you study more and write more, you will naturally improve. I suggest you just take a look at it. There is no need to go to great lengths to change the article. You can just improve it later.

Forgive me but I couldn't help but laugh after reading the introduction. It's rare to find such copywriting that can attract people all at once. It can be seen that the author is very concerned about it. The author's writing is good. I hope to add some descriptions, mainly about the environment. After all, I must write about filming, and the environment is essential. Secondly, in terms of characterization, you can try to work on the characters' language or their demeanor when speaking. Of course, the above is just a personal opinion. The author's writing is still very attractive. Come on^0^~

Inexplicable heroine and plot

…Brainless female supporting role, inexplicably pretentious heroine… uh uh uh

I feel like the heroine is mentally retarded